GMAT Question of the Day - Daily to your Mailbox; hard ones only

It is currently 10 Dec 2018, 19:11

Close

GMAT Club Daily Prep

Thank you for using the timer - this advanced tool can estimate your performance and suggest more practice questions. We have subscribed you to Daily Prep Questions via email.

Customized
for You

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History

Track
Your Progress

every week, we’ll send you an estimated GMAT score based on your performance

Practice
Pays

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History

Not interested in getting valuable practice questions and articles delivered to your email? No problem, unsubscribe here.

Close

Request Expert Reply

Confirm Cancel
Events & Promotions in December
PrevNext
SuMoTuWeThFrSa
2526272829301
2345678
9101112131415
16171819202122
23242526272829
303112345
Open Detailed Calendar
  • Free lesson on number properties

     December 10, 2018

     December 10, 2018

     10:00 PM PST

     11:00 PM PST

    Practice the one most important Quant section - Integer properties, and rapidly improve your skills.
  • Free GMAT Prep Hour

     December 11, 2018

     December 11, 2018

     09:00 PM EST

     10:00 PM EST

    Strategies and techniques for approaching featured GMAT topics. December 11 at 9 PM EST.

Sentence Correction - Subject , modifier , modifier Scenarios

  new topic post reply Question banks Downloads My Bookmarks Reviews Important topics  
Author Message
Intern
Intern
avatar
B
Joined: 13 Sep 2016
Posts: 21
Sentence Correction - Subject , modifier , modifier Scenarios  [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 16 Jul 2018, 22:51
Major doubt , Help on Subject - modifier , modifier Scenarios

I have two scenarios :

Situation for sentence 1 :

Operator had tried taking approval from council to move the machine to manufacturing site but approval was not given by council.
Operator has now decided to move the machine to manufacturing site to avoid machine storage costs.
Operator has given a letter to council for information.
We(third party) have received the letter describing this situation

Is this correct ?
Sentence 1 : We have received the letter submitted by Operator to council , informing the machine mobilization to manufacturing site.

Are the modifiers "informing" and "submitted" modifying the noun letter ?

If the above sentence is not correct , how should the sentence be framed ?

Situation for sentence 2 :

Some application indicating request to retain the whole area of compound has been submitted by Operator along with a jointly approved resolution to place the machinery.
We are requesting the operator to share that application.

Is this correct ?
Sentence 2 :

Grateful if you can share the application ,submitted with jointly approved resolution , indicating the request to retain the whole compound area.

Are the modifiers "submitted" and "indicating" modifying the noun application ..
or should I write

Grateful if you can share the application ,submitted with jointly approved resolution , which indicates the request to retain the whole compound area.

In this sentence can "which" jump over the modifier phrase submitted with jointly approved resolution , to modify application --application which indicates the request to retain the whole compound area.

If the above sentence is not correct , how should the sentence be framed ?

@egmat@mikemcgarry

Many thanks in advance
Sidftr
Intern
Intern
avatar
B
Joined: 13 Sep 2016
Posts: 21
Re: Sentence Correction - Subject , modifier , modifier Scenarios  [#permalink]

Show Tags

New post 16 Jul 2018, 22:52
Major doubt , Help on Subject - modifier , modifier Scenarios

I have two scenarios :

Situation for sentence 1 :

Operator had tried taking approval from council to move the machine to manufacturing site but approval was not given by council.
Operator has now decided to move the machine to manufacturing site to avoid machine storage costs.
Operator has given a letter to council for information.
We(third party) have received the letter describing this situation

Is this correct ?
Sentence 1 : We have received the letter submitted by Operator to council , informing the machine mobilization to manufacturing site.

Are the modifiers "informing" and "submitted" modifying the noun letter ?

If the above sentence is not correct , how should the sentence be framed ?

Situation for sentence 2 :

Some application indicating request to retain the whole area of compound has been submitted by Operator along with a jointly approved resolution to place the machinery.
We are requesting the operator to share that application.

Is this correct ?
Sentence 2 :

Grateful if you can share the application ,submitted with jointly approved resolution , indicating the request to retain the whole compound area.

Are the modifiers "submitted" and "indicating" modifying the noun application ..
or should I write

Grateful if you can share the application ,submitted with jointly approved resolution , which indicates the request to retain the whole compound area.

In this sentence can "which" jump over the modifier phrase submitted with jointly approved resolution , to modify application --application which indicates the request to retain the whole compound area.

If the above sentence is not correct , how should the sentence be framed ?

Many thanks in advance
Sidftr
GMAT Club Bot
Re: Sentence Correction - Subject , modifier , modifier Scenarios &nbs [#permalink] 16 Jul 2018, 22:52
Display posts from previous: Sort by

Sentence Correction - Subject , modifier , modifier Scenarios

  new topic post reply Question banks Downloads My Bookmarks Reviews Important topics  


Copyright

GMAT Club MBA Forum Home| About| Terms and Conditions and Privacy Policy| GMAT Club Rules| Contact| Sitemap

Powered by phpBB © phpBB Group | Emoji artwork provided by EmojiOne

Kindly note that the GMAT® test is a registered trademark of the Graduate Management Admission Council®, and this site has neither been reviewed nor endorsed by GMAC®.