oryahalom wrote:
I have a question about fragment sentences, that is sentences that lack verb or subject. Let's take those two examples from Manhattan sentence correction strategy guide:
1. The cat sitting by the stairs watched the mouse.
2. A new textbook focused on recent advances in artificial intelligence assigned by our instructor.
According to Manhattan's explanation, the first sentence is grammatically correct as it includes a subject (cat) and a verb (watched). On the contrary, the second sentence is fragment because it lacks a main verb. Up to their explanation, for the sentence to be grammatically correct , the sentence should written as "A new textbook ... was assigned" (we should add "was" before the word assigned).
I don't understand what is the difference - in structure - between the two sentences that make's the first sentence right and the second sentence wrong. In other words, why should we add the word "was" to the second question but not to the first sentence?
Thanks in advance!
A new textbook
focused on recent advances in artificial intelligence assigned by our instructor.
The first highlighted part is a -ed modifier modifying textbook, and the second highlighted part is an -ed modifier modifying intelligence. Hence, this sentence lacks a verb.
Both 'focused' and 'assigned' are NOT verbs here.
We need a form of 'to be' to make them into a verb, and thats why 'was' is used before assigned, making it into a verb.
Correct Sentence - A new textbook focused on recent advances in artificial intelligence
was assigned by our instructor.
Here 'focused.... intelligence' is describing the new textbook, and this textbook was assigned by the instructor.
=> The textbook was assigned by our instructor. Which Textbook? The one focused on recent advances in artificial intelligence.
For the first sentence, The cat
sitting by the stairs watched the mouse.
The highlighted part is a
-ing modifier giving us more information about the Cat.
'Watched' is the main verb of the sentence i.e. the action the cat is performing.
=> The Cat watched the mouse. Which Cat? The one sitting by the stairs.
Does this help?