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First, if the verb yawns is actioned by a singular subject, then it must be the proportion.
It looks very funny that a proportion can yawn. So logically the verb should be actioned by the chimpanzees, in which case the SV agreement is in shambles, in addition to flouting the to touch rule of the restrictive pronoun that. The same problem arises with in E.
Choice to Choice:
A. Chimpanzees who do? Are Chimpanzees human beings to be pronouned whom?
B. Exceed should be definitely exceeds because that is the action of the proportion which is singular.
Coerced those who -- same problem as in A. In addition, the comparison changes from proportion – proportion to proportion to chimpanzees
D- That does that. A demonstrative pronoun cannot stand alone like this
E. Chimpanzees that does? How do you take it, merrily ignoring the touch rule
IMO, no answer seems to be right. Now what is Kaplan’s defense of OA?
Here is the official explaination:
Scanning the answer choices, we immediately see "exceed" versus "exceeds". The subject here is "proportion" which is singular, so the verb should be "exceeds". Therefore we eliminate (A) and (B). (A) has the additional problem of using "who" to refer to animals. Generally, "that" is preferred to "who" when referring to animals. This leaves us with (C), (D) and (E).
(C) contains a parallelism problem: It compares "the proportion of . . ." with "those (chimpanzees)". For the sake of parallelism, it should compare either chimpanzees with chimpanzees, or the proportion with the proportion. So we eliminate (C).
(D) contains the unidiomatic "that does that", so (D) is incorrect. The GMAT prefers "does so" (or "do so") to "does that" (or "do that").
(E) correctly tackles four issues: (i) It uses the singular verb form "exceeds"; (ii) it compares "the proportion" with "the proportion"; (iii) it uses "that", not "who", to refer to chimpanzees; and (iv) it properly uses "does so" as opposed to "does that". Therefore (E) is correct.
I'm finding that the Kaplan Hard SC's are very tricky indeed!
I chose E on this one primarily because:
1. We need "exceeds" and not "exceed"
2. In the second half, "that does so" seemed to best fit "the proportion" when I scanned the answer choices.
From my understanding, in the second half, 'of chimpanzees..." is a prepositional phrase and "does so" rightly refers to the proportion. Is this reasoning correct or what am I not seeing here?