OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONQuote:
The claim of organizers was that the rally for public healthcare drew close to half a million people, compared with city officials’ estimation, the number of people attending the rally at fewer than 300,000.
(A) The claim of organizers was that the rally for public healthcare drew close to half a million people, compared with city officials’ estimation, the number of people attending the rally at fewer than 300,000
(B) Organizers claimed that the rally for public healthcare drew close to half a million people, but the city officials estimated the number of people at the rally to be less than 300,000
(C) The rally for public healthcare drew close to half a million, as organizers claimed, although less than 300,000 were there, as the city officials estimated
(D) It was the claim of the organizers that the rally for public healthcare drew close to half a million people, unlike the city officials, who estimated the number of people at the rally to be fewer than 300,000
(E) Organizers claimed that the rally for public healthcare drew close to half a million people, compared to the estimation of city officials that the number of people who attended the rally was fewer than 300,000
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Split #1: countable nouns vs. numbersThis is a very tricky topic.
If we are talking about uncountable nouns, nouns for which we would ask “how much?,” we use “less”—less time, less money, less water, less humor, less freedom.
If we are talking about countable nouns, nouns for which we would ask “how many?,” we use “fewer”—fewer windows, fewer teachers, fewer books, fewer ideas, fewer chances.
BUT, if we are talking about pure numbers, residents of the number line, we use “less”—for example,
3 is less than the square root of 10.This final rule includes instances in which we talk about “the number of” some real-world countable thing, such as people attending a rally.
We talk about “fewer people” but say that “the number of people was less.”
Choice (A): “the number of people … fewer” = incorrect
Choice (B): “the number of people … less” = correct
Choice (C): “less than 300,000 [people]” = iffy
Choice (D): “number of people … fewer” = incorrect
Choice (E): “number of people … fewer” = incorrect
Split #2: Grammatical Construction and contrastChoice (A) compares a “claim” to an “estimation”—not exactly the same, but not clearly wrong.
The phrasing with “at” is awkward, unidiomatic, and wrong.
This choice is incorrect.
Choice (B) has [independent clause] “but” [independent clause]—a well-constructed contrast.
[KEEP.]
Choice (C) is strange: it contrasts two incompatible factual statements. It can’t be true both that the rally “drew close to half a million” and that “less than 300,000 were there.”
This is grammatically correct but a complete logical impossibility!
This choice is incorrect.
Choice (D) has an illogical comparison: “it was the claim … unlike city officials.”
We have to compare like-to-like, ideas to ideas, or people to people.
This choice is incorrect.
Choice (E) is one of the longest answer choices.
The first half is flawless. Participles can be noun-modifiers or verb-modifiers, so the participle “compared to” can be understood as applying to the verb “claimed”: even so, comparing this to “estimation,” a noun, is awkward.
The entire second half is extremely clunky and indirect: changing the verb “to estimate” to the noun “estimation” removes any active punch this section had.
This choice is incorrect.
The only possible choice is (B).MY COMMENTSkungfury42 , please see Mike McGarry's explanation above.
We should not trust our ear on this one. It's weird.
Numerical quantifiers are weird.
By "numerical quantifiers" I refer to words such as
rate, percentage, proportion, level, quantity, and
number.
Numerical quantifiers themselves are uncountable and take "less," not "fewer."
A very similar
Magoosh question that I just noticed and that contains two very helpful posts at the top of the thread can be found by clicking
here.
Read the first two posts after the actual question. (That is, read the second and third posts, by
Mike McGarry and retired mod
pqhai, respectively.
When the noun at issue is itself a number—for example,
rate, population, volume, percentage, and
number—we use
less, not
fewer.
Finally, see a very good
Magoosh blog post
here for a 3-minute read about the words
more, greater, and
less (and what to use with the word "number").