Quote:
The minister’s council of advisors, including his trade and finance strategists,
have not been very forthcoming about their point of view since the minister released his controversial trade reform proposal.A. have not been very forthcoming about their point of view since the minister released his controversial trade reform proposal.
B. has not been very forthcoming about its point of view since the minister released his controversial trade reform proposal.
C. have not been very forthcoming about their point of view since he released his proposal on controversial trade reform.
D. was not very forthcoming about its point of view since the minister released his controversial trade reform proposal
E. has not been very forthcoming to its point of view since he released his proposal on controversial reform in trade
KAPLAN OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONStep 1: Understanding Intended Meaning
The minister’s council of advisors, including his trade and finance strategists, have not been very forthcoming
SV pair does not agree in number.
The subject is a group noun “council” which is singular. It is separated from the verb “have not been” by the additive phrase “including….strategists”.
But the verb is plural and does not agree with the singular subject.
Correct version: has not been
about their point of view since the minister released his controversial trade reform proposal.
NP pair does not agree in number
The plural “their” is incorrectly being used to refer to the singular noun “council.
Correct version: “its point of view
Intended meaning:
The minister released his trade reform proposal.
This proposal was controversial.
Since then, the minister’s council of advisors has not been very open about its point of view.
The council includes the minister’s trade and finance strategists.
Step 2: Eliminate choices with identified errors
Checking for five aspects
1. Golden rules
a. SV pair does not agree in number.
b. NP pair does not agree in number
2. Meaning : distorted
3. Lists
a. No error
4. Tenses
a. No error
5. Idioms
Eliminate
The following choice/s have one or more of the errors present in Choice A.
Choice C
A. have not been very forthcoming about their point of view since the minister released his controversial trade reform proposal.
Option A Feedback:
Incorrect and Eliminated in Step 2
B. has not been very forthcoming about its point of view since the minister released his controversial trade reform proposal.
Option B Feedback:
Fitting in the original sentence
The minister’s council of advisors, including his trade and finance strategists, has not been very forthcoming about its point of view since the minister released his controversial trade reform proposal.
✓ Logical
✓ Clear,
✓ Same as the intended meaning
Correct Choice.
C. have not been very forthcoming about their point of view since he released his proposal on controversial trade reform.
Option C Feedback:
Incorrect and Eliminated in Step 2
D. was not very forthcoming about its point of view since the minister released his controversial trade reform proposal
Option D Feedback:
Fitting in the original sentence:
The minister’s council of advisors, including his trade and finance strategists, was not very forthcoming about its point of view since the minister released his controversial trade reform proposal.
Incorrect use of simple past tense.
The use of “since” mandates the use of the present perfect “has not been”. The use of “since” indicates that the council was not forthcoming when the proposal was released and it is still not forthcoming.
Incorrect Choice.
E. has not been very forthcoming to its point of view since he released his proposal on controversial reform in trade
Option E Feedback:
Fitting in the original sentence:
The minister’s council of advisors, including his trade and finance strategists, has not been very forthcoming to its point of view since he released his proposal on controversial reform in trade.
“Forthcoming to” is not the correct idiomatic expression.
Per the intended meaning, the proposal caused a controversy.
However, here the meaning conveyed is the “reform” in trade is a controversial one.
Incorrect Choice