The new proposal will
encourage larger transparency about what data is being collected and how they will be used, and discourage the need for vaguely worded privacy or user notices.
A. encourage larger transparency about what data is being collected and how they will be used, and discourages the need for vaguely worded
the new proposal does two things:
1- encourage greater transparency about what data is being collected and how it will be used
2- discourage the need for vaguely worded privacy or user notices.
error analysis:
larger is used for countable nouns,
transparency is uncountable; hence, greater is needed.
they is used for data.
so, it has pronoun error.
POE:
A) as mentioned
B. encourage
greater transparency regarding what data is being collected and how it will be used, but discourage the need of vaguely worded
and--->but: changes the intended meaning
"discourage
the need for" not the need of"
transparency regarding----> transparency about
C. encourage greater transparency about what data is being collected and how it will be used, and discourage the need for vaguely wordedD. encourage greater transparency
on what data is being collected and how it will be used, and
this will discourage the need for vaguely worded
pronoun error, this must be used as adjective. we cannot use it instead of a pronoun.
E. encourage greater transparency
for what data is being collected and how it will be used, and
discourages the need for vaguely worded
S-V error