Hi PeanutButter429,I can see exactly where this is going sideways, and it's a really natural reading. You're treating the argument as if it's about having
too many officers, so that E's "deterrent" line sounds like a reason to say "enough already, don't add more."
But look again at
why the author calls the hire foolish. The reason isn't overstaffing - it's money:
"There is sufficient funding to pay the salaries of the new officers, but not the salaries of additional court and prison employees to process the
increased caseload of arrests and convictions that new officers usually generate."
So the whole argument rests on one assumption:
more officers -> more arrests/convictions -> a bigger caseload the city can't afford to process.Now read E for what it actually says. A "
deterrent effect on crime" means crime goes
down - a deterrent is something that stops crime from happening. So:
- More officers -> crime is deterred ->
fewer crimes
- Fewer crimes ->
fewer arrests and convictions
- Fewer arrests/convictions -> no flood of extra court/prison work -> the funding shortfall the author worried about never materializes
That directly knocks out the argument's core assumption, so the hire isn't foolish after all. That's a
weakener, which is what the question asks for.
The trap in your reading is turning "an increase
will deter crime" into "we already have enough, so more is excessive." But the argument never worried about excess officers - it worried about excess
caseload. E removes exactly that worry.
Quick way to feel it: imagine E instead said "an increase in officers will have
no effect on crime." Then caseloads still climb, the funding problem stays, and the hire really would look foolish. The word "deterrent" is doing all the work - flip it and the whole effect flips with it.
Answer: EPeanutButter429
Middletown’s ratio of police officers to citizens
has reached a level at which an increase in the number of officers will have a deterrent effect on crime
Does that not mean any further increase would be foolish? IMO