Correction after OA
Attack point should be:
1. comparison
a,people are much more similar to their friends than to strangers
b,people are much more similar to their friends than their friends to strangers
if i were to represent this in quantitative, this will pose a huge difference in the meaning
a,
A is three times closer to C than to B
------------C - - - A - - - - - - - - - B--------------------------------
b, A is three times closer to C than C is three times closer to B
------------C - - - A --------------------------------
------------C - - - B--------------------------------
2. parallelism: the difference is that and that this difference
3. Subject-verb singular: the interesting point "is"
4. verb modifier "providing" modifies the preceding verb "reduces", with both action referring to the right subject; "this difference" as the doer.
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Explanation before OA
A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing
B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides
C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide
D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing
E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides
Eliminate A,C
subject verb error
"what is much more interesting to know" (singular) + are(plural)
Eliminate E
1/parallelism ... that... and (that) this ...
2/meaning error
3/missing verb even if the meaning is as intended
1/what is much more interesting to know is
>that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends,
and
what is much more interesting to know is
> (that )this difference reducing the spread of disease provides
2/in terms of meaning,
we asked ourselves, what is so interesting?
1. the fact that the genes are different and
2. the fact that the difference reduces the spread of disease
3/"missing main verb " or "wrong use of-reducing-continuous tense" even if the meaning is as intended
this difference "reducing" the spread of disease provides
Eliminate B
meaning error
no causal effect relationship
The intended meaning is NOT as follows,
the fact that the difference reduces the spread is to provide an advantage
D winner
1/"difference" is the subject and doer of action -reduces and -providing
2/verb-ing verb modifier - providing modifies the action -reduces of the preceding clause
this shows the effect of the causal and effect relationship
it is because the difference reduces the spread of disease, therefore the difference provides an advantage.
...that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities.
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