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IMO D

According to scientists, people are genetically more similar to their friends than strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities.


A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing.
We need to for maintaining parallelism.

B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides.
S-V agreement okay but and provides at the end is not showing the result.

C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide
We need to for maintaining parallelism.
D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing
Perfect everything is Ok

E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides.
Not parallel.
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A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing - to strangers is required to maintain parallelism to their friends

B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides - Puts reduces and spread in parallel - Incorrect

C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide - - to strangers is required to maintain parallelism to their friends

D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing - Correct, providing gives additional information as a modifier

E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides - and this refers to the entire previous clause - not acceptable
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Here’s my explanation:

Q: According to scientists, people are genetically more similar to their friends than strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities.

1. ...more similar TO their friends than TO strangers —> need parallel structure here —> eliminate choice A and C.

Analyse the rest: they differ in the form of the verb “provide”

B. ...provides: incorrect as the difference in immune system seem not to be able to provide people with advantage for befriending with people with different immunity (it may, but it is not said that it would, there’s no direct linking)

D. ..., providing —> correct, as this means that the act (or fact) that [the difference reduces the spread of disease] will provide benefit for making friend with people of different immunity.

E. Incorrect, as saying “the difference reducing (which reduces) the spread of disease provides...” makes no sense or at least doesn’t seem to be logically right.

So the answer must be D.

Well, I don’t know how to explain in more details as the answer is quite obvious...

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IMO D ;
A & C are not ll ; because to is missing
amongst B,D,E
reduces the spread of disease and provides is incorrect usage in B and in D is correct


According to scientists, people are genetically more similar to their friends than strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities.


A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing

B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides

C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide

D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing

E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides
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Noun clause (what is much more interesting to know) takes singular VERB. IS (NOT ARE). A&C are OUT.
A & C are also providing ambiguous (two) meaning.
(1) people are genetically more similar to their friends than to strangers.
(2) people are genetically more similar to their friends than are strangers

According to meaning, "HOW THE DIFFERENCE REDUCES the spread of disease" makes sense.
Action:
this difference reduces the spread of disease.
How SEGMENT: COMMA+ providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities

Other options are non sense (providing either separate action or purpose of main action).
So, other options (B, C & E) are OUT.

D is unambiguous & perfect parallel with meaning sense.
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First split
Are/IS in: what is much more interesting to know are/is that the. Clearly singlular subject , Hnece, needs a singular verb. A and C are out

Let us see the remaining option

B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides Creates a false parallelism

D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing Correct answer. Corrects all errors in all the other answer choices

E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides Clear Parallelism error. E is out



IMO Answer must be D
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According to scientists, people are genetically more similar to their friends than strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities.


A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing- incorrect, we need 'than to' in order to avoid ambiguity at the beginning of option; subject-verb agreement issue - 'what is much more interesting to know' is a clause and thus needs singular verb 'is'
people are genetically more similar to their friends than strangers of the same population can have two interpretations-
i.people are genetically more similar to their friends than to strangers of the same population
ii.people are genetically more similar to their friends than strangers of the same population are

B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides- incorrect - this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides -- the usage of AND gives illogical meaning as providing needs to be a result of the 'reduces'

C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide- incorrect, we need 'than to' in order to avoid ambiguity; subject-verb agreement issue - 'what is much more interesting to know' is a clause and thus needs singular verb 'is'

D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing- Correct

E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides- incorrect, we need to repeat 'that' after and to show that the part that follows' this difference ...' is parallel to part that follows the previous 'that';
Also, the meaning of this part ' this difference reducing the spread of disease provides' is illogical

Answer D
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The correct choice will be D.

According to scientists, people are genetically more similar to their friends than strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities.

A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing
------> More ....than... should be followed by parallel elements.
are - should be is


B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides ----> the difference does not provides them evolutionary advantages. Here ,providing is correct because it presents the result.

C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide
--> same as A (parallel error)

D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing
--> CORRECT

E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides
--> The last fragment ",and this difference...." has no verb
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Lets simplify the sentence

According to scientists, people are genetically more similar to {their friends}=X than {strangers of the same population}=Y, but what is much more interesting to know are {that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends}=P, and {this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities}=Q.

So, our sentence is
According to scientists, people are genetically more similar to X than Y, but what is much more interesting to know are P and Q

Since we can skip 'to' in case of Y, so the options we're left with are A and C. providing modifies 'the spread of disease' which is illogical. Hence C
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Answer choice D- to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing

The original sentence had the following errors, which were corrected in choice D.
1. parallelism error- similar to friends than To strangers.
2. SVA error- what is much more interesting to know IS.
3. parallelism error- to know is that XXX and That this difference XXX.
4. ,providing correctly modifies the preceding clause.
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According to scientists, people are genetically more similar to their friends than strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities.

A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing

B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides

C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide

D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing - correct

E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides
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According to scientists, people are genetically more similar to their friends than strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities.


A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing

B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides

C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide

D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing --- Correct construction

E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides
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Sentence Structure
Subject - Verb:
      According to scientists,
    people are genetically more similar to their friends than to strangers of the same population, but
    what is much more interesting to know is - what is much more interesting to know is an ENTIRE clause acting as a subject
      that the genes
          that( genes) control immunity to certain diseases
        are different between friends, and
      that this difference reduces the spread of disease,
        providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities. Verb-ing form( Providing ) highlighting the result of the preceeding clause.

Issues:
    X is more Y than Z
    This statement does NOT clearly mention the two entities being compared.
      Whether
        X is more Y than Z is - Comparison between X and Z
      OR
        X is more of Y than of Z - Comparison between Y and Z
    Thus, A and C - Comparison issue

Answer choice analysis:
    A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing
      - Comparison issue OUT

    B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides
      - Meaning issue: The verb-ing form( depicting the result) is missing.
      B states simultaneous actions - reduces and provides. OUT

    C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide
      - Comparison issue OUT

    D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing
      All issues check. D is the winner!
      However, I feel D should be -
        genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different among friends
          rather than
        genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends
      The difference in genes is among the set of friends( plural entity), a set which is more than 2. Thus, among > between.

    E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides
      - Meaning issue: The verb-ing form( depicting the result) is missing.
      Parallelism issue( missing that before this difference ...) OUT
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Meaning Analysis:
Scientists believe that:
- People are genetically more similar to their friends than strangers
- More int. fact - genes which control the immunity are different between friends -> This difference minimises the spread of disease, as a result it provides an advantage for making friends of different immunity.
Error Analysis:
A: SV Agreement Error, Parallelism and Idiom error (more similar to X than to Y)
B: Cause effect relationship is lost because of "and provides"
C:Parallelism and Idiom error (more similar to X than to Y)
D: Conveys the intended meaning
E:Cause effect relationship is lost because of "Disease reducing.... provides"
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According to scientists, people are genetically more similar to their friends than strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities.

Error Analysis :
Always comparison should be done between 2 entities properly else it would give us ambitious meaning .
Here comparison is done between people to friends and strangers .
we can infer 2 meaning
1 . People are more similar to their friends than strangers are similar to their friends
2 . People are more similar to their friends than people are similar to their friends.

sentence 2 makes more sense than 1 . So here we need a extra 'to' to infer correct meaning .

A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing-Incorrect
As discussed above we need a 'to stranger ' to infer proper meaning .
providing - reduce in the spread of diseases is not by providing an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities. - does not make sense
ie., providing does not act as a modifier we need a 'and' to make it parallel and meaningful.

B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides-Correct .
All the errors mentioned above, in option A are corrected here , use of 'to' and ' and'.
reduces and provides are parallel.

C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide-Incorrect
Meaning changes when we use 'to provide ' as to is used to convey intention .

D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing
It contains the second errors mentioned in the option A , should be changed with the use of and .
E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides
reducing and provides is not parallel.
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Correction after OA

Attack point should be:

1. comparison
a,people are much more similar to their friends than to strangers
b,people are much more similar to their friends than their friends to strangers

if i were to represent this in quantitative, this will pose a huge difference in the meaning

a,
A is three times closer to C than to B
------------C - - - A - - - - - - - - - B--------------------------------

b, A is three times closer to C than C is three times closer to B
------------C - - - A --------------------------------
------------C - - - B--------------------------------

2. parallelism: the difference is that and that this difference
3. Subject-verb singular: the interesting point "is"
4. verb modifier "providing" modifies the preceding verb "reduces", with both action referring to the right subject; "this difference" as the doer.


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Explanation before OA

A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing

B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides

C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide

D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing

E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides



Eliminate A,C
subject verb error
"what is much more interesting to know" (singular) + are(plural)

Eliminate E
1/parallelism ... that... and (that) this ...
2/meaning error
3/missing verb even if the meaning is as intended

1/what is much more interesting to know is
>that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends,
and
what is much more interesting to know is
> (that )this difference reducing the spread of disease provides

2/in terms of meaning,
we asked ourselves, what is so interesting?
1. the fact that the genes are different and
2. the fact that the difference reduces the spread of disease

3/"missing main verb " or "wrong use of-reducing-continuous tense" even if the meaning is as intended
this difference "reducing" the spread of disease provides


Eliminate B
meaning error
no causal effect relationship

The intended meaning is NOT as follows,
the fact that the difference reduces the spread is to provide an advantage



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1/"difference" is the subject and doer of action -reduces and -providing

2/verb-ing verb modifier - providing modifies the action -reduces of the preceding clause
this shows the effect of the causal and effect relationship

it is because the difference reduces the spread of disease, therefore the difference provides an advantage.


...that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing them an evolutionary advantage for befriending those with different immunities.

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A. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing
1) Parallelism: people are genetically more similar to their friends than to someone else. that ... and that - the last that is missing
2) Plural is incorrect

B. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease and provides
Option B says that: "this difference" reduces and provides something. Incorrect

C. strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know are that the genes controlling immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease to provide\
1) Parallelism: people are genetically more similar to their friends than to someone else.
2) "are" is incorrect
3) This difference does something in order to provide. incorrect

D. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and that this difference reduces the spread of disease, providing
I like it, that ..... and that .... nice parallel
providing correctly modifies the action of "this difference reduces the spread of disease"

E. to strangers of the same population, but what is much more interesting to know is that the genes that control immunity to certain diseases are different between friends, and this difference reducing the spread of disease provides
1) that ... and that - the last that is missing
2) The difference provides something. Incorrect
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