Official Solution:Even in places in which the average temperature is as warm as Florida, snowfall is sometimes possible.A. places in which the average temperature is as warm as
B. a place with an average temperature as warm as
C. a place as warm as
D. places as warm as it is in
E. a place that is as warm a
This sentence is testing mainly concision, but the wordiness in the original sentence also causes a misplaced modifier, making it sound as if
temperature is intended as a direct comparison to
Florida. The correct answer will be the most concise version of the underlined portion that keeps the sense of the sentence and eliminates ambiguity.
A. This phrase is unnecessarily wordy, and
temperature is incorrectly paralleled to
Florida.
B.
Temperature is incorrectly parallel to
Florida, and the phrase is wordy.
C. CORRECT. This option both provides a more concise rewording of the original underlined portion and eliminates ambiguity, making
warm an appropriate modifier for
Florida.
D. Ambiguity has been eliminated, but the phrase as
warm as it is in is unnecessarily wordy.
E. The words
that is are redundant and unnecessary.
Answer: C