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Sailed out of New Orleans, the owner and captain of the steamboat Emma were two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist .

A. Sailed out of New Orleans, the owner and captain of the steamboat Emma were two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist.
B. Sailed out of New Orleans, two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist, were the owner and captain of the steamboat Emma.
C. Sailed out of New Orleans, the steamboat Emma was owned and captained by two established mariners, Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist, and John Jones.
D. The steamboat Emma was owned and captained by two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist and sailed out of New Orleans.
E. The owner and captain being two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist, the steamboat Emma sailed out of New Orleans.
Hi,

I marked Option C for this question, but i still have a doubt why can't sailed out of New orleans modify the sailors, dont the sailors sail in the ocean. If yes then option B should be correct
Please help.

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Sailed out of New Orleans, the owner and captain of the steamboat Emma were two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist .

A. Sailed out of New Orleans, the owner and captain of the steamboat Emma were two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist.
B. Sailed out of New Orleans, two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist, were the owner and captain of the steamboat Emma.
C. Sailed out of New Orleans, the steamboat Emma was owned and captained by two established mariners, Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist, and John Jones.
D. The steamboat Emma was owned and captained by two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist and sailed out of New Orleans.
E. The owner and captain being two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist, the steamboat Emma sailed out of New Orleans.
Hi,

I marked Option C for this question, but i still have a doubt why can't sailed out of New orleans modify the sailors, dont the sailors sail in the ocean. If yes then option B should be correct
Please help.

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B. Sailed out of New Orleans, two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist, were the owner and captain of the steamboat Emma.

I understand your question.

Check the red font parts. Is his referring to John Jones or Sam Smith? It's not clear. Pronoun error.

were the owner and captain. Are we talking about multiple people or one person? If we are talking about multiple people, we should use "were", but then we would need "owners and captains."

If we are only talking about one person, say, Sam Smith, we would need "was" instead of "were."

The sentence structure in (C) is also way better than (B).

(C) Sailed out of New Orleans, the steamboat.
(B) Sailed out of New Orleans, two mariners, John and Sam, .....
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Sailed out of New Orleans, the owner and captain of the steamboat Emma were two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist .

A. Sailed out of New Orleans, the owner and captain of the steamboat Emma were two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist.
B. Sailed out of New Orleans, two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist, were the owner and captain of the steamboat Emma.
C. Sailed out of New Orleans, the steamboat Emma was owned and captained by two established mariners, Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist, and John Jones.
D. The steamboat Emma was owned and captained by two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist and sailed out of New Orleans.
E. The owner and captain being two established mariners, John Jones and Sam Smith, who would later make his name as a novelist, the steamboat Emma sailed out of New Orleans.


KAPLAN's EXPLANATION:

Read the Original Sentence Carefully, Looking for Errors:

This awkwardly constructed sentence has a modification flaw as written, since the modifying phrase "Sailed out of New Orleans" seems to modify "the owner and captain," whereas it should modify the steamboat.

Scan and Group the Answer Choices:

(B) retains the original sentence’s error. (C), (D), and (E) change the wording.

Eliminate Wrong Answer Choices:

(A) and (B) can be eliminated because of the modification error.

(C) corrects the error, revising the sentence to say that the steamboat was sailed out of New Orleans. Everything else looks good, so make sure the remaining answers are wrong.

(D) places the "sailed . . . " modifier at the end of the sentence as part of the clause starting "who would later." This clause modifies Sam Smith. When this information is put here, the sentence says Smith became a novelist and sailed out of New Orleans. Eliminate this choice.

Finally, (E) uses the awkward "being" construction, and it places the the steamboat too far away from the modifying phrase that tells who owned and captained it. This choice can be eliminated.

(C) corrects the original error and introduces no new ones. It is correct.

TAKEAWAY: When the entire sentence is underlined, you don't always have to read each answer choice in its entirety. As soon as an error appears, scrap the answer and move on.
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