It was because she was plagued by injuries that tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years between 1984 to 1988, occasionally working as a television commentator.
Issue in original sentence: Modifier error- does not imply intended meaning- Tracy austin sat out because of injuries
use of between is unidiomatic, it means that Tracy was on/off playing in game, which is incorrect
(A) It was because she was plagued by injuries that tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years between
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(B) After winning the Italian and U.S. Opens in 1979 at the age of 16, injuries plagued tennis celebrity Tracy Austin and forced her to sit out from
Modifier error- after winninf italion and us opens in1979 at the age of 16- should be followed by Tracy austin and it is incorrectly referring to injuries plagued
(C) Tracy Austin, the tennis celebrity who, plagued by injuries, won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out from
issue with tennis celeberity who, who is modifying tennis celebrity and not Tracy Austin, it is also run on snetence
(D) Plagued by injuries, tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, sat out the years from
looks good, lets keep it, conveys intended meaning of sentence
(E) Tennis celebrity Tracy Austin, who won the Italian and U.S. Opens at age 16 in 1979, was plagued by injuries when she sat out between
run on sentence- Tennis celebrity Tracy austin
So correct OA:D
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