OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
Quote:
The security systems of small companies can often be hacked
easier than large ones because small companies have a tendency to lack the financial resources to upgrade their software and set up protective barriers.
A)
easier than large ones because small companies
have a tendency to lackB)
easier than those of large ones because of small companies
tending to lack
C) more easily than
large ones because small companies
have a tendency of lackingD) more easily than those of large ones because small companies tend to lack
E) more easily
than large ones because small companies have tended to lack
• SPLIT #1 - EASIER v. MORE EASILYThe word
easier is an adjective that describes a noun.
→
The first verbal section of the GRE was easier than the second.The
phrase more easily is an adverb that usually describes a verb or an adjective, but never a noun.
→
He learned French more easily than he learned Mandarin.Easier and
more easily are intended to modify
can be hacked.
Can be hacked is a verb. We need the adverb
more easily.Eliminate options A and B.
Option A also employs the wordy phrase
have a tendency to lack.Option B also uses the awkward and problematic phrase
tending to lack.• Split #2 - ParallelismMore easily is a comparison phrase.
The things under comparison should be similar kinds of things.
Look at the words just to the right of
than.In options C and E, those words are
large ones.
Large ones refers to
large companies; small companies are described by size, whereas security systems are not.
Options C and E incorrectly compare security systems and large companies.
Eliminate option E. (Option A also contains this error.)
Option E also switches unnecessarily from present to present perfect (
have tended).
The best answer is D.→
those of correctly replaces the plural noun
security systems.Now security systems [in small companies] are being compared to security systems [in large companies].
→
more easily correctly modifies
can be hacked→
tend is followed by the infinitive
to lack. The construction
tend to lack is idiomatic.
By contrast, in option C,
tendency of lacking is not idiomatic.
Finally, in option B,
because of small companies tending to lack is not correct for a few reasons.
The most important reason for you to remember is that a dedicated noun such as
tendency is almost always preferred to a gerund (a verbING).
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