OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
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A derivative of the North American Echinacea flower, which has been effective in preventing colds, is grown by many small farmers out west.
A) A derivative of the North American Echinacea flower, which has been effective in preventing colds,
B) A derivative, which has been effective in preventing colds, of the North American Echinacea flower,
C) A North American Echinacea flower derivative, which has been effective in preventing colds,
D) The North American Echinacea flower has a derivative
which has been effective in preventing colds,
thatE)
The North American Echinacea flower, a
derivative of which has been effective in preventing colds,[/quote]
• Read carefully and do not assume that you can figure out intended meaning from option A.
Sometimes you must use all five options to understand intended meaning.
• The intended meaning of the sentence is
1) that a
derivative of the Echinacea flower is effective in preventing colds and
2) that many small farmers in the west grow the flower.
• Split #1, S/V: What is grown by the farmers?What is grown by the farmers?
The
flower, not the derivative.
In other words,
the North American Echinacea flower must be the subject that is attached to the main verb and
predicate
is grown by many small farmers out west.In incorrect options A, B and C, the farmers are growing the derivative rather than the flower.
Eliminate A, B, and C
• Split #2 - Meaning and modifiers→ What is effective in preventing colds? The
derivative of the flower, not the flower itself.
In option D, the antecedent of the
that modifier is arguably ambiguous.
That antecedent could be
the derivative (
the flower has a derivative ... that is grown),
or it could be
the flower that is grown. On the first pass, I advise against elimination on the basis of pronoun ambiguity unless that ambiguity is glaring.
The possible ambiguity is not glaring here; "that" does not often "jump back over a verb" and should be as close as possible to its noun.
Write
ambig? on your pad (or whiteboard) and do not cross off option D for this reason.
On the other hand (British English speakers, take note), in option D, the
which modifier should have been preceded by a comma.
→ WHICH/THAT
In British English,
which and
that are interchangeable.
In U.S. English and on the GMAT,
which and
that are not interchangeable.
→
which introduces nonessential information and is preceded by a comma or set off by commas
→
that introduces essential information and is almost never set off by commas
People debate whether GMAT will continue to observe the distinction between
which and
that. In at least one official question in the
nonunderlined portion,
which was used without commas to introduce essential modifiers.
On the other hand, I have
never seen a correct answer choice (i.e., the underlined part) in which the word
which introduced essential material and was not set off by commas.
SPOILER ALERT: In addition, in 2020, GMAC published a new official question that tests this very distinction.
The question remains in the 2021 and 2022 Official Guide. You can find that question
here.
Option D is eliminated.
The correct answer is E.Option E conveys the correct meaning;
the derivative is now used as an appositive/modifier (a noun phrase that gives more information about another noun,
flower). Furthermore, the derivative is not the subject of "what is grown."
Option E correctly suggests that the flower is grown and its derivative is effective in preventing colds.
The relative pronoun
which in "a derivative of which" means "a derivative of the flower."
Whenever you wonder about a relative pronoun (that, which, who), replace it with the noun you think it refers to; the sentence should still make sense.
COMMENTSThis question might have frustrated or discouraged a few of you.
You need not worry; the question is a bit unusual, but now you have seen the trap and you will avoid a similar one in the future.
Fight back. Get a little mad at the test.
(When I teach CR, I tell people to be furious at the conclusion, as if it were the dumbest thing they'd ever seen.)
Let's think about test-taking strategy.
Options A, B, and C are almost indistinguishable—unless you are sure that you are looking at a 700+ level question (and even then), three nearly identical options = all three are wrong. (Yes, stylistically, option A is slightly superior to option C, and both are superior to option B, but the three are still so similar that I am immediately suspicious.)
What distinguishes A, B, and C from D and E?
The subject of "is grown."
In A, B, and C, the derivative is grown.
In D and E, the flower is grown.
Farmers do not grow derivatives. Farmers grow flowers.
Now your odds are 50-50: option D or option E?
If you chose D over E because "a derivative of which" seemed strange to you, well, now you know that the phrasing is correct.
Actually, that phrasing is both correct and frequently used in formal writing, so as you read more English prose, you will see "of which" more often.
These answers are good and easy to understand.
Well done.
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