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Too complicated, you want to see one consistent idea through all parts of the star. The results should speak to the problem and that should inform the task. There should be some connectedness.

Creating this kind of permutation is just going to obscure the main communication objective which is *the quality you're trying to get across about yourself that the business school is interested in.*

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Is it advisible to stick with majorly one quality to exhibit per essay or it is fine to show multiple qualities as step by step solutions of multiple challenges faced with a task.

For instance : After client escalations about the existing method of project deliver, my company decided to form a new dedicated team for it. I was pulled from another tean to build and lead the new team.
There were multiple challenges in achieving multiple expectations posted by my employer.
I handled every challenge differently, showcasing a different quality and finally made an impact by providing improvement in multiple functions(like : cost optimisation, inter team communication, team culture and efficiency enhancement)


Are these too many qualities to include in one essay?
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I can't really tell from what you've given me, but know this:
More is not better it is worse.

You need to really be compassionate with your reader and they are only going to be able to focus on one main idea, figure out what is core and what really demonstrates Brilliance. What led to the Breakthrough?

Think about this like an advertisement on TV. If someone wanted to sell a car to you and they threw out a zillion things would you be more likely or less likely to pay attention?

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I can't really tell from what you've given me, but know this:
More is not better it is worse.

You need to really be compassionate with your reader and they are only going to be able to focus on one main idea, figure out what is core and what really demonstrates Brilliance. What led to the Breakthrough?

Think about this like an advertisement on TV. If someone wanted to sell a car to you and they threw out a zillion things would you be more likely or less likely to pay attention?

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Thanks a lot. Thats example was very helpful.
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