OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Day 198: Sentence Correction (SC2)
Because unique
for the major sports because it is the only ball game in which the team does not have possession of the ball on offense .
A)
for the major sports because it is the only ball game in which the team does not have possession of the ball
on offense B)
for the major sports in that it is the only ball game
that the team on offense does not have possession of the ball [
missing verb for "ball game"]]
C) among major sports
as the only ball game
that the team on offense does not have possession of the ball [missing verb for "ball game"]
D) among major sports in that it is the only ball game in which the team
on offense does not have possession of the ball E) among the major sports
by being the only ball game in which the team does not have possession of the ball
on offense[/quote]
In the set "major sports," baseball is unique
because is it the only ball game in which team on offense does not have the ball,
• Split #1: FOR or AMONG?The sentence means that baseball is different from other major sports.
Baseball is unique
FOR the major sports is not correct.
One definition of among means "being a member of a larger set."
HERE-- Oxford Dictionary online (linked) uses this examples:
Snakes are among the animals most feared by [human beings].Baseball is a unique member of the set "major league sports."
Baseball is unique
among those sports because . . . .
Options A and B incorrectly use "for."
Eliminate A and B
• Split #2: the case of the Missing Verb-- remember this little fact: relative pronouns (that, who, and which) "eat up verbs."
One of GMAC's favorite tricks is to tack on a relative clause without also adding a verb for the antecedent of that clause
-- In options B and C, the relative pronoun
that takes ("eats up") the verb "does not have."
As a result,
the only ball game is a subject without a verb.
Eliminate C (Option B is already gone)
• Split #3: Noun modifier error: Keep nouns and their modifiers close to each other.The phrase "on offense" describes
the team. Because "on offense" is a noun modifier, it should be "touching" or very close to its noun.
In options A, B, and E we have
...
that only ball game does not have possession of the ball on offenseThose three options "on offense" seems to modify "the ball" and is not close enough to "the only ball game."
Eliminate E (A and B are already gone)
• By process of elimination, the answer is D• Option D:
-- uses the correct preposition
among-- uses "in that," which means "because.'
-- places "on offense" right next to "team"
• NOTES - extra details
-- In option (C), the word
as is inferior to (D)'s language, "in that."
-- "In that " means
because. "As" can mean
because but in option (C), "as" works strangely.
Option D is better than option C
-- "by being" in (E) is probably grammatical but much too intentional.
IF we have Subject + Verb + object + comma + BY ____ING, then the "by verbING" construction shows how the result in the main clause was achieved.
Correct:
He made the special bread by mixing two kinds of flour.-- Option D is better than Option E; option E
The answer is D COMMENTShero_with_1000_faces , you asked whether E were grammatical.
You think it is.
I think it probably is grammatical, although my native ear wants to hear "why" MLB is unique, a question that is answered in D's construction "in that," which means because.
On the other hand, (E) tells us
how MLB is unique, and although the idea is logical, the phrasing is not as good as that in D.
And E puts the modifier in the wrong place.
@mykrasowski , I was hoping to convince some of you to become codebreakers by analyzing my answer patterns . . .
I'm kidding.
My mind finds patterns in everything. I am unconsciously drawn to them. I am glad you said something.
I seem to have chosen identical answers on the same day quite frequently.
Someone else mentioned my doing so.
This question is hard.
And these answers are good. Well done.