Financially unsupported by his doubting family, the young artist ultimately earned its approval and enjoyed some success when he pursued work modeling for fellow artists and photographers, and photos of him graced the pages of a periodical his father read regularly.
a) Financially unsupported by his doubting family, the young artist ultimately earned its approval and enjoyed some success when he pursued work modeling for fellow artists and photographers, and photos of him graced the pages of a periodical his father read regularly.-WRONG
>> its refer to what? Pronoun error . it should be his/her
b) Financially unsupported by his doubting family, the young artist ultimately earned their approval and enjoyed some success when he pursued work modeling for fellow artists and photographers, where photos of him graced the pages of a periodical his father read regularly.-WRONG
>> their is wrong. It should be his /her family approval\
>> where doesn’t fit right here
c) With no familial financial support because they doubted him, the young artist ultimately earned the approval of his family and enjoyed some success when he pursued work modeling for fellow artists and photographers; work that graced the pages of a periodical his father read regularly.-WRONG
>> they doubted him? They refers to whom?
>>no family financial support because fellow artists and photographers doubted him—wrong meaning ( doubting happened before he met his fellows artisits)
d) With no financial support from his doubting family, the young artist ultimately earned the approval of them and enjoyed some success when he pursued work modeling for fellow artists and photographers; work that graced the pages of a periodical his father read regularly.
>>earned approval of them? Fellow artists and photographers
>> logic wise D is ok .>>them can represent to family ?
e) With no financial support from his doubting family members, the young artist had to earn their approval and enjoyed some success when he pursued work modeling for fellow artists and photographers and his photos graced the pages of a periodical his father read regularly.
>> family members : is right. Their approval is right
>> had to earn change In original meaning
>> wrong meaning : enjoyed some success when his photos graced the pages of a periodical his father read regularly
>>grammatically E is Ok but meaning wise is wrong