OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONTHE PROMPTQuote:
Internet usage has
become so pervasive in virtually every aspect of daily life, and many psychologists are beginning to turn their attention to the impact of constant exposure to screens on the lives of children and adolescents.
• The idiom tested is
SO X THAT Y - GMAC tests this and other SO idioms quite frequently.
→ GMAC is not a fan of the word
so by itself unless
so is a coordinating conjunction (and even in that situation, you will find very few official questions)
→
So X that Y means: Attribute X is
so extreme in this scenario
that Y results.
• I wrote a post about the SO idioms that GMAC tests most frequently.
→
X so that Y, for example, is not the same as
So X that Y→ That post is
here.
• meaning?
→
Pervasive internet usage has prompted psychologists to examine the effects of screen exposure on children and adolescents. → We need to see cause and effect between
pervasive internet usage and
psychologists who are examining how screen exposure affects children and adolescents.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) so pervasive in virtually every aspect of daily life,
and many psychologists are beginning
• The word
and almost never expresses causation
• In this option, the "connective tissue" between the two sentences sounds casual rather than causal.
And is used to join two items of equal grammatical weight but does not itself imply any causation.
→ We need to see causation.
The psychologists are beginning to examine the effects of screen exposure
because internet usage has become very pervasive.
• the word
so in the first clause should immediately cue you to look for the word
that, which is likely to be in the second clause
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) so pervasive in virtually every aspect of daily life
, many psychologists are beginning
• You cannot "stick" two independent clauses together with nothing more than a comma.
→ Option B is called a
comma splice. Some people call it a
run-on. The construction is incorrect 100% of the time, no exceptions.
→ I wrote a short post about that very topic with a link to a good resource
here.
• be wary of
so by itself. Look for a
thatEliminate B
Quote:
C)
so pervasive in
daily life’s virtually every aspect, so many psychologists are beginning
•
So X so Y? Huh? Weird. Not a correct construction.
•
So X that Y is nowhere to be found.
•
daily life’s virtually every aspect is a hot mess; compare to
virtually every aspect of daily life.
-- True, both are possessive forms, but the latter is much better and not at all awkward.
• GMAC does not use
so meaning
very and
so meaning
as a result in the same sentence
→ if you see
so meaning
very, as in this case, look for
that• The first
so makes the second
so a stylistic disaster (as well as unidiomatic)
Correct: She was very cold, so she put on a heavy cost.
Wrong: She was so cold, so she put on a heavy coat.
Eliminate C
Quote:
D)
of such pervasiveness in virtually every aspect of daily life that many psychologists are beginning
•
of such pervasiveness is not standard. Usually you will see
SUCH + adjective + noun + THAT (
Danny Tidwell was such a beautiful dancer that even cynical reporters raved about him.)
or
SUCH + noun + THAT (
My brother is such a pest that I often pretend to be asleep around him.)
•
of such pervasiveness is a stylistic disaster.
If you are not sure what to do with the phrase, compare (D) to (E). Option E is better.
Eliminate D
Quote:
E)
so pervasive in virtually every aspect of daily life
that many psychologists are beginning
• correctly uses So X that Y
X = pervasive
Y = many psychologists are beginning to examine [effects of screen time on children]
The answer is ECOMMENTSsaurabh851 , I welcomed you in the other OE, but two welcomes never hurt anyone.
These answers range from good to outstanding.
I am impressed by 2-3 answers. You probably know who you are.
Nice work by all, and especially nice work by a few. Kudos.