OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Potatoes, be they in fried, roasted, or baked form,
are an extremely popular food item today, second in human consumption only to rice.
• "be they"?
→ In English,
be they X, Y, or Z and
be it A, B, or C are idiomatic expressions.
Yes, I know—because the phrase is in the nonunderlined portion,
be they is not a decision point.
The phrase may sound strange. Just know that it is idiomatic.
The idiom may show up. I highly doubt that GMAC would test this idiom; it's esoteric.
But the phrasing might show up in a correct answer, and I just want you to have seen it.
It makes an appearance in an adage:
Be it ever so humble, there is no place like home.• sentence structure?
→ The phrase be
they in fried, roasted, or baked form is modifying
potatoes as is the phrase
an extremely popular food item today.
• the word
only→ The word
only is intended to modify
rice and should be placed close to
rice.
When
only is an adjective, its placement is more restricted than when the word is an adverb.
Almost always, noun modifiers should be placed close to their nouns.GMAC tests placement of the word
only, especially when
only is an adjective.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) are an extremely popular food item today, second in human consumption only to rice
• Correct
→ The sentence places
only before rice.
KEEP
Quote:
B) are an extremely popular food item today,
only second in human consumption to rice
• "only"
→
only is intended to modify the word
rice and should be placed close to it
• meaning
→ The use of
only to modify
second distorts the meaning of the sentence.
At the least, option A is
much clearer. (In option A,
only correctly modifies
rice.)
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) are an extremely popular food item today, second in
only human consumption to rice
• "only"
→
only is intended to modify the word
rice and should be placed close to it
• strange meaning
→ The placement of
only creates strange meaning.
The only situation in which potatoes are second in consumption to rice is in human consumption?
What, in other situations that involve consumption, such as mammalian consumption, potatoes take first place and rice takes second?
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D)
an extremely popular food item today, are second in human consumption only to rice
• "stacked" adjectives
→ back-to-back adjective phrases are sometimes called "stacked" adjectives.
Notice that the verb
are shifts.
Now we are left with two adjective phrases, back to back, that describe the same noun,
potatoes.
Both are appositives. One uses a strange idiomatic format.
It is usually better to split long adjectives if possible.
Stacked adjective phrases often force the reader to work too hard to find a verb.
• compare to option A
→ Option A is better than D.
In option A, the two adjective phrases are separated by the linking verb
are, making it easier than it is in (D), to keep track of what the subject (potatoes) is doing.
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E)
an extremely popular food item today, are
only second in human consumption to rice
• "only"
→
only is intended to modify the word
rice and should be placed close to it
• "stacked adjectives"
→ we have the same problem as that in option D: too many adjectives stacked after a noun creates a sentence that is not as good as that in option A
ELIMINATE E
The best answer is A.COMMENTSNicely done!
Keep up the good work.