There are more and more women with the wealth and buying power that

Question

There are more and more women with the wealth and buying power that advertisers crave but  with needs for  relevant information still go largely ignored by magazine publishers

A.with needs for
B.have need of
C.who need
D.their need for
E.whose needs for

RenB · Answer

Meaning analysis-
There are women with certain characteristics whose needs for info go unnoticed.

Error Analysis
With needs for- modifies women with the characteristics, but doesnt fit ith the remaining 'relevant info....'

Option Anlysis-
E fits in bang on

mialanknox · Answer

In this question, the decision markers are: 
(1) Pronoun vs. Preposition vs. Verb
(2) Need vs. Needs

First, in Clause 1 "There are...crave" women is the main subject. So, in Clause 2 "But....publishers" we must also have a subject.  The non-underlined part has no reference to the subject women. Therefore, the underlined part must include a subject.  We can see there are 3 options with a pronoun - Option C, D & E. We eliminate Option A & B without a pronoun.

Second, we notice that the main verb of Clause 2 "need/needs" is in the underlined portion.  Who does need(s) refer to? Women in Clause 1. While women is a plural noun in general, here in this case women are referred collectively as a group.   The author is not referring to all women, he is referring to a group of women who have money and buying power. By using "with money and buying power that advertiser's crave" he has created a restrictive clause.  Therefore, women here is a singular noun and we must use a singular verb "needs" to go with it. Option C & D both use plural form of the verb. Therefore, we can eliminate C & D.

The correct answer is Option E.

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walterwhite756 · Answer

There are more and more women with the wealth and buying power that advertisers crave  but  with needs for  relevant information still go largely ignored by magazine publishers.

Second clause shown in blue color, needs a subject which may be a pronoun as well so A and B are eliminated.

C does not fit into the meaning of sentence so eliminated.

D does not agree in S-V number. It should be  their  needs  for

E fits and hence is the answer.

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