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Hey shrikumar,
while you have some good ideas of how to criticize the argument, the essay is not well organised.

- you have to start with an introduction which clearly states what the claim is, and lays out in a general way how you are going to criticise it. it is not clear from reading this what is the original argument and what is your claim:
- "There is a direct correlation between the processing of color film and the processing of frozen foods." - who is saying that? you? them?
- you mention information which is missing, but not why it is important: what would knowing past or present data on frozen foods give us?
- in general, follow a structure of: introduction, three paragraphs laying out three separate critiques, and a summary paragraph which summaries them and mentions how it could be improved.

DavidTutorexamPAL Thank you. I finally now know the basics. Appreciate your response!
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