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Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling again

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Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University.

(A) who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became

(B) having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become

(C) who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming

(D) who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became

(E) who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become

Originally posted by bmwhype2 on 20 Jun 2007, 10:31.
Last edited by Bunuel on 12 Dec 2019, 03:03, edited 3 times in total.
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Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University.
A) who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became
B) having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become
C) who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming
D) who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became
E) who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become


Please explain why an answer is wrong.


"Who had " correctly modifies Vivian Thomas.
> eliminates B,C,D

A has tense problem - "had'..."struggling"

E is my pick
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A) who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became
B) having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become
C) who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming
D) who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became
E) who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become <-- CORRECT
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Vivien Thomas, who ...(non defining clause), struggled against overwhelming odds to become X and eventually to receive X.

Furthermore, when you recognize the correct structure of the sentence you know it must be (B) or (E), since both have the correct 'to become', and voilà you have the 2-3 split! (E) is the correct answer. Cheers
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New post 20 Jun 2007, 11:46
good explanations...the OA is E.
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OA is E.

Vivien Thomas, who had no formal training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from JHU.
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Could the answer choice D become a good contender if it were, "who, having had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become......."?

Verbal experts, need help.
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Could the answer choice D become a good contender if it were, "who, having had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become......."?

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Though i m not an expert but below is my take on this:

there is no verb for main sub Vivien Thomas.
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If option D was modified as mentioned, then the structure of the sentence would become

Subject, non essential modifier, descriptive clause.

There would be no main verb as sujit2k7 mentioned.

Marcab wrote:
Could the answer choice D become a good contender if it were, "who, having had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become......."?

Verbal experts, need help.
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Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University.
A) who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became
Subject,modifier,modifier,Subject is awkward.
B) having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become
Sentence fragment with two back to back modifiers
C) who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming
Subject who he struggled is awkward.
D) who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became
Sentence fragment
E) who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become
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Option "D" is a run on sentence - look at this : :idea:

Vivien Thomas,who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University.

The sentence is not complete. Also " and eventually to receive " is not parallel. It should be "became a cardiac surgeon and received" OR as in option "E" .
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bmwhype2 wrote:
Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University.
A) who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became
B) having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become
C) who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming
D) who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became
E) who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become


Please explain why an answer is wrong.


Meaning of sentence- Vivian thomas had no formal medical training. He struggled against overwhelming odds to become a cardiac surgeon and received eventually a doctorate from JHU.

A) Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University. Incomplete sentence- 'Vivian Thomas he became'
B) Vivien Thomas, having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University. Very weird sentence structure.
C) Vivien Thomas, who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University. Vivian Thomas he struggled against- Incomplete sentence
D) Vivien Thomas, who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University. Having had is not right. 'became' is not parallel to 'to receive'
E) Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University. Vivian thomas struggled against ...... 'to become' and 'to receive' are parallel.

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Parallelism

Vivien Thomas, who…….., struggled against overwhelming odds to become X and eventually to receive Y.
A: “in struggling against overwhelming odds” makes no sense, “who had” and “struggling” are not parallel.
B, C, and D: the sentence structure is illogical. In C and D “who” has been placed illogically and awkwardly between two comas.
E: is the best choice as ‘who’ correctly modifies Vivien Thomas. “to become” and “to receive” are parallel.
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Vivien Thomas, who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became a cardiac surgeon and eventually to receive an honorary doctorate from Johns Hopkins University.

(A) who had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds, he became - Vivien Thomas he became -- Subject subject verb -- Incorrect

(B) having had no formal medical training, in struggling against overwhelming odds to become - illogical sentence structure

(C) who, having no formal medical training, he struggled against overwhelming odds in becoming - Vivian Thomas he struggled against -- same as A

(D) who, having had no formal medical training and struggled against overwhelming odds, became - having had is incorrect ; parallelism issue - became and to receive are not parallel

(E) who had no formal medical training, struggled against overwhelming odds to become - Correct

Answer E
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