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Right according to MGMAT book on SC:
a.) We had an arrangement IN WHICH he cooked AND I cleaned.
But according to me, right statement should be:
b.) We had an arrangement IN WHICH he cooked AND IN WHICH I cleaned.

Please explain why a.) is right and don't need to be converted to b.) as per parallelism
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a.) We had an arrangement IN WHICH he cooked AND I cleaned.
We had an arrangement IN WHICH
he cooked
AND
I cleaned.
The sentence has correct parallelism since "he cooked" and "I cleaned" are parallel.

b.) We had an arrangement IN WHICH he cooked AND IN WHICH I cleaned.
We had an arrangement
IN WHICH he cooked
AND
IN WHICH I cleaned.
The sentence has correct parallelism since "IN WHICH he cooked" and "IN WHICH I cleaned" are parallel.
Bur option a) is better since it is more concise.
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How do we recognize if the sentence is fine with one subordinate or need another one?
For example:
c.) Wrong: I want to retire to a place WHERE I can relax AND I pay low taxes.
d.) Right: I want to retire to a place WHERE I can relax AND WHERE I pay low taxes.

Why does the c.) which has only one subordinate like a.) is wrong as 'I can relax' and 'I pay low taxes' are parallel, but needs to be converted to d.) with two subordinates to be right ?
Can you please explain the difference between a.) and c.)

Above example is also taken from MGMAT SC book.
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How do we recognize if the sentence is fine with one subordinate or need another one?

c.) Wrong: I want to retire to a place WHERE I can relax AND I pay low taxes.
d.) Right: I want to retire to a place WHERE I can relax AND WHERE I pay low taxes.

option C conveys two meanings.
meaning 1: I want to retire to a place WHERE I can relax. I pay low taxes. (two independent thoughts)
meaning 2: I want to retire to a place where
2.a)I can relax
2.b)I pay low taxes
because of two different meanings this sentence becomes ambiguous.

option D corrects the error in option C by stressing the two items of the list that need to be parallel.
d.) [I want to retire to a place] WHERE I can relax AND WHERE I pay low taxes.
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Right according to MGMAT book on SC:
a.) We had an arrangement IN WHICH he cooked AND I cleaned.
But according to me, right statement should be:
b.) We had an arrangement IN WHICH he cooked AND IN WHICH I cleaned.

Please explain why a.) is right and don't need to be converted to b.) as per parallelism
Thanks in advance.

Both the options are correct. A is more concise. We had an arrangement and I cleaned are not parallel. They would have been parallel had both the sentences been Independent clause. But that is not the case. Because before and ,there is no comma(","). Hence, "I cleaned" is not an IC. So those two sentences are not parallel. Now we can safely assume without any ambiguity that after in which there are two dependent clauses.
He cooked.
I cleaned.

So basically there were two possible cases. As one cannot happen. So we have only one option. Hence repetition of in which is redundant. But please remember conciseness and redundancy are stylistic preferences, not deterministic errors. Only use them as last resorts.

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How do we recognize if the sentence is fine with one subordinate or need another one?
For example:
c.) Wrong: I want to retire to a place WHERE I can relax AND I pay low taxes.
d.) Right: I want to retire to a place WHERE I can relax AND WHERE I pay low taxes.

Why does the c.) which has only one subordinate like a.) is wrong as 'I can relax' and 'I pay low taxes' are parallel, but needs to be converted to d.) with two subordinates to be right ?
Can you please explain the difference between a.) and c.)

Above example is also taken from MGMAT SC book.

The problem here isn't that the parallelism is bad. In fact, you're correct: the parallelism in (c) is right, because 'I can relax' and 'I pay low taxes' are parallel.

The reason (c) is wrong is actually something else: it's ambiguous. There are two different, equally reasonable ways to read (c).

First reading:

I want to retire to a place where I can relax
AND
I pay low taxes.

In this reading, the speaker is saying that she wants to retire to a certain place, and on top of that, she also pays low taxes right now.

Second reading:

I want to retire to a place where:
I can relax AND I pay low taxes.

In this reading, the speaker is saying that she wants to retire to a place where she can do BOTH things after she retires: relax, and pay low taxes.

Since you can't tell which one is right, the sentence is ambiguous and incorrect.

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(d) is correct because there's only one grammatically correct way to read it. The part of the sentence after "and" is "WHERE I pay low taxes." Therefore, this piece can only be parallel with something else that has a WHERE before it. The only other WHERE is before "I can relax." So, you know what's supposed to be parallel to what: 'Where I can relax' is parallel to 'where I pay low taxes.' There's no ambiguity, and the parallelism is good, so the sentence is correct.
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The problem here isn't that the parallelism is bad. In fact, you're correct: the parallelism in (c) is right, because 'I can relax' and 'I pay low taxes' are parallel.

The reason (c) is wrong is actually something else: it's ambiguous. There are two different, equally reasonable ways to read (c).

First reading:

I want to retire to a place where I can relax
AND
I pay low taxes.

In this reading, the speaker is saying that she wants to retire to a certain place, and on top of that, she also pays low taxes right now.

Second reading:

I want to retire to a place where:
I can relax AND I pay low taxes.

In this reading, the speaker is saying that she wants to retire to a place where she can do BOTH things after she retires: relax, and pay low taxes.

Since you can't tell which one is right, the sentence is ambiguous and incorrect.

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(d) is correct because there's only one grammatically correct way to read it. The part of the sentence after "and" is "WHERE I pay low taxes." Therefore, this piece can only be parallel with something else that has a WHERE before it. The only other WHERE is before "I can relax." So, you know what's supposed to be parallel to what: 'Where I can relax' is parallel to 'where I pay low taxes.' There's no ambiguity, and the parallelism is good, so the sentence is correct.

Thanks a lot ccooley for the perfect explanation. A hundred kudos to you !

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