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all financial institutions face a similar crisis, those investment houses that hold a significant number of subprime mortgage loans and the insurance companies that underwrite credit swaps obviously dictates the types and mounts of assistance required to fix the problem.
(A) all financial institutions face a similar crisis,those investment houses that hold a significant number of subprime mortgage loans and the insurance companies that underwrite credit swaps obviously dictates
(B) each financial institution faces a similar crisis, the investment houses holding a significant number of subprime mortgage loans and the insurance companies that underwrite credit swaps obviously dictate
(C) all financial institutions face a similar crisis; the financial investment houses that have a significant holding in subprime mortgage loans and the insurance companies that underwrite credit swaps obviously dictates
(D) each financial institution faces similar crises, the investment houses that hold a significant number of subprime mortgage and each of the insurance companies that underwrite credit swaps obviously dictates
(E) all financial institutions face similar crises, those investment houses that have a significant holding in subprime mortgage loans and those insurance companies that underwrite credit swaps obviously dictate
Why is B wrong? Does't E change meaning?
+1 for ESplit 1:S-V agreement Insurance companies - Plural subject should have 'Dictate'- Plural verbEliminate A, C, D
Split 2:Between B and EThe investment houses is wrong diction. Those investment houses is right diction. Hence eliminate B(A) all financial institutions face a similar crisis,those investment houses that hold a significant number of subprime mortgage loans and
the insurance companies that underwrite credit swaps obviously
dictates(B) each financial institution faces a similar crisis,
the investment houses holding a significant number of subprime mortgage loans and the insurance companies that underwrite credit swaps obviously dictate
(C) all financial institutions face a similar crisis; the financial investment houses that have a significant holding in subprime mortgage loans and
the insurance companies that underwrite credit swaps obviously
dictates(D) each financial institution faces similar crises, the investment houses that hold a significant number of subprime mortgage and each of
the insurance companies that underwrite credit swaps obviously
dictates(E) all financial institutions face similar crises,
those investment houses that have a significant holding in subprime mortgage loans and
those insurance companies that underwrite credit swaps obviously
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Rectifies diction error and uses correct parallelism