I finished one essay - used a phrase from Lao-Tse to make it sound all happening - sent it to one of my post MBA buddies, His response:
1) there is no 'in the professional frontier', (expletive)...'ON the professional frontier'
2) trading division of the investment banking industry ...LOL
3) economic development of south asia ... ROTFL
4) three phones on the NYSE ... Hysterical
5) Lao-Tse....Premature death due to laughter...
His email ended with the following
"hahahahahahaha..ur essay is a scream....it wins for 'best comedy routine of the year' especially the lao tse lines...am still wiping away tears of mirth....
it has to be TOTALLY reworked...u cn use this as toilet paper....."
Needless to say, I am like a deflated balloon sitting in a corner, no make that, like a plate of biriyani, baking in the sun for the last 3 days.
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