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According to the nineteenth-century schema of a "well-made play,"
all of the happenings on stage are driven by a single discovery, such as that of a letter, and when they follow from it in a series of events, often involving misinterpretations by the characters.
A. all of the happenings on stage are driven by a single discovery, such as that of a letter, and when they follow from it in a series of events, often involving misinterpretations by the characters
B. all of the happenings on stage are driven by a single discovery, such as that of a letter, and by the series of events, often involving misinterpretations by the characters, that follows from it
C. all of the happenings on stage are driven by a single discovery, such as that of a letter, as well as the series of events, often involving misinterpretations by the characters, that follows from it
D. a single discovery, such as that of a letter, drives all of the happenings on stage, and also the series of events, often involving misinterpretations by the characters, that follow from it
E. the discovery of a single item such a letter drives all of the happenings on stage, as well as the series of events, often involving misinterpretations by the characters, that follow from it
Hi, I found this question in Gmatfree and I am unclear with the interpretation the author has given. Can someone please help me?
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Official Explanation
Creating a filter: The prompt gets awkward and imprecise around the phrase, "when they follow from it in a series of events." We will hold (A) in contempt and examine the others, especially for options that handle the pronouns more clearly and get rid of the "when," because we are not talking about a time.
Applying the filter: preferring the active voice, we might start with (D) and (E). But in (E), "single item" is redundant, and "as well as" is a phrase that should almost never be used. In (D), it seems redundant to drive all of the happenings and the series of events that follow from the discovery. Choice (C) also has the dreaded "as well as," which also introduces ambiguity about what role the "series of events" is playing. (B) is clearer: all the events are driven by one of two things, the discovery, and the series of events that follows from it. Choice (B) uses passive voice, but it's the only one to convey the meaning correctly. A defense of the use of passive voice here is that it allows the author of the sentence to put the ideas of the sentence in an order that is easier to understand.
The correct answer is (B).