OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Although the Olympic athlete’s mother was at home watching her son on television, the competition
was as exciting to her as the royal attendees sitting in the first row.
• What two things are being compared?
→ The level of excitement created by the competition that two parties experience—a mother watching on TV and attendees sitting in the front row.
The levels of excitement are equal.
•
AS X AS Y→ sear the
AS . . . AS construction into your memory.
The word
as has many meanings.
→ If
as is
used to compare things, you must see
AS X
AS Y
NOT:
As . . . than NOT:
As . . . thatNOT:
So . . . as [There is
one exception to this last pairing that involves negation. We can say
NOT SO MUCH X AS Y. Take a look at
this question, here, and at my explanation
here.]
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) was as exciting to her as
[to] the royal attendees sitting in the first row
→ in order to create a parallel and thus grammatical comparison, the word
to must be placed before "the royal attendees."
Otherwise, the sentence says that the mother was as excited to see her son as she was excited to see the royal attendees sitting in the front row.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) was as exciting to her
than [to]the royal attendees sitting in the first row
• AS must be paired with AS, not
than. • Like option A, this option needs the word "to" placed before "the royal attendees" to maintain parallelism, meaningful comparison of similar things, and correct meaning
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) was as exciting to her as to the royal attendees sitting in the first row
• I do not see any errors
• This option appropriately compares the level of excitement created by the competition between the two parties, and the word
to is inserted after the second
asKEEP
Quote:
D) was as exciting to her
than to the royal attendees sitting in the first row
• In a comparison, we cannot pair
as with
than.
Wrong: As exciting to X than to Y
Correct: As exciting to X as to Y
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) was
[as] exciting to her as to the royal attendees sitting in the first row
• The first
as in AS X AS Y is missing. The sentence is gibberish.
ELIMINATE E
The correct answer is C.COMMENTSColor me impressed.
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