Hey!
I'm trying to put up a new template based on Chineseburned's masterpiece. I'm attempting to add more words to it so that I'll have to write less out of the thinking during the actual test.
Here is the introductory part. Any comments?
Quote:
The speaker’s essential claim is that (reversed and subtly change grammar structure)… The issue is a controversial one and it might be tempting to agree with the speaker, and so many people do, on the basis that… and thus…
However, the speaker fails to appreciate that…
A closer examination reveals that… can advocate for… and therefore present the issue in new light.
Here is what can be written based on it (answering the prompt: "There is only one definition of success — to be able to spend your life in your own way.”). Any comments?
Quote:
The quote essentially reads that success can easily be defined as being able to spend your life in your own way. The issue is a controversial one and it might be tempting to agree with the quote, and so many people do, on the basis that there is no universally accepted definition of success and thus different interpretations are allowed. However, the quote fails to appreciate that there may be other criteria for success. A closer examination reveals that happiness, ability to bring benefit to society by work and broad network of people to get advice from can advocate for much more thorough definition of success and therefore present the issue in new light.
Thanks in advance!