chaoticsilence
Those with admits/interview invites... would be absolutely great if you can share some pointers on your approach to the essays especially the first 2,... anything you can share would be a great value add for all the r2 applicants.
Well, as my profile indicates I got dinged in R1, but I spoke to enough current GSB students to get a decent grasp on what I think they want in the essays. I'm somewhat surprised I didn't at least get an interview, as the GSB guys I ran my essays by seemed to think they looked pretty strong, but oh well.
As someone else pointed out the word limit is fairly small, and it's by design--they want you to be surgical with your essays. Get in, tell the story, get out, without a lot of useless fluff. You'll have to cut words wherever possible--getting rid of passive voice and say-nothing modifiers and adjectives will help a lot there.
Because of the GSB's ability to be extremely selective and their reputation for accepting exceptional people who go on to be world-changers, you have to do something to distinguish yourself with your positioning. You can't just be a consultant or I-Banker with a 3.8 GPA and 760 GMAT--you have to be the consultant who also did a volunteer trip to build schools in sub-Saharan Africa, or the I-Banker who also started a volunteer group to mentor inner-city kids. Obviously that's not a hard and fast rule, but anything you can bring up that sets you apart from the rest of your community will help.
Or having a vision for your post-MBA career like this one (
https://www.nuruinternational.org/videos/theendjakesstory.html) will help too, and will set you apart from people who say vague stuff like "I want to join a big 4 consulting firm then move onto general management..." which was essentially what I wrote, and probably gave them the impression that I didn't have a clear enough plan for exactly what I wanted to do.
Hope that helps.