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okay, i assume you have already struck off C,D and E.

Read the sentence as:
The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction because,.........., the species has so little genetic variation that it is extremely vulnerable to enviornmental change

The missing part should give you an answer for 'why the species has so little genetic variation?'

Now fit A and B one by one in your answer
A. The species has little genetic variation resulting from blah blah
B. The species has little gentic variation as a result of blah blah

Which one do you now think is correct? I hope you say B.
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Cant be C, D and E (was clear thanks to the "and" at the end),
B fits best
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Hello Experts, i am not able to convincingly elide the clauses here. Confused between option A and B (how do we identify the difference ) is their any meaning difference...

what is "resulting from/as a result of..intensive inbreeding generations ago"....referring to..

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May I know how C,D and E are eliminated
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May I know how C,D and E are eliminated


D and E gets eliminated because of use of word 'and'.

In option C, I think the use of word 'they' spoils the game. It looks like a simple example of parallel structure to me.
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How does one get intended meaning from (A)? I faltered in choosing
(D) since parallelism sounded so correct to ears :lol:

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The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction because, resulting from intensive inbreeding generations ago, the species has so little genetic variation that it is extremely vulnerable to environmental change.

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(D) because there was intensive inbreeding generations ago and

The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction
because
there was intensive inbreeding generations ago
and
species has so little genetic variation that it is extremely vulnerable to environmental change.

There is ABSOLUTELY no issue with sentence structure and grammar in this option and parallelism marker AND in
(D) correctly connects two clauses. What is GMAC really on to here?
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How does one get intended meaning from (A)? I faltered in choosing
(D) since parallelism sounded so correct to ears :lol:

The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction
because
there was intensive inbreeding generations ago
and
species has so little genetic variation that it is extremely vulnerable to environmental change.

There is ABSOLUTELY no issue with sentence structure and grammar in this option and parallelism marker AND in
(D) correctly connects two clauses. What is GMAC really on to here?
Option A does not convey the intended meaning in this case. :)

This is the sentence that option A leads to:
The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction because, resulting from intensive inbreeding generations ago, the species has so little genetic variation that it is extremely vulnerable to environmental change.

This option seems to indicate that the species itself was the result of intensive inbreeding generations ago. This doesn't make any sense, as the species needs to exist before any intensive inbreeding can take place within the species.

Option D is also out for meaning:
The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction because there was intensive inbreeding generations ago and the species has so little genetic variation that it is extremely vulnerable to environmental change.

Here we are expected to connect the inbreeding to the lack of genetic variation. That is, we don't want to present them as two separate reasons. Also, as a result of intensive inbreeding is much clearer than there was intensive inbreeding. For example:

He got a 700 because there was a lot of hard work. ← This is very vague.
He got a 700 as a result of a lot of hard work. ← This is much better.
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The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction because, resulting from intensive inbreeding generations ago, the species has so little genetic variation that it is extremely vulnerable to environmental change.


(A) because, resulting from intensive inbreeding generations ago,
(B) because, as a result of intensive inbreeding generations ago,
(C) because they inbred intensively generations ago so that
(D) because there was intensive inbreeding generations ago and
(E) as a result of their intensive inbreeding generations ago, and

I think choice A is better than B
'resulting from..." in choice A modifies "species has..." grammatically. this modification is good.

in choice B, "a a result of intensive inbreedding generations ago" is unclear. it is unclear what is under inbreeding. it is not clear species is under inbreeding. so, choice B is wrong, I think

but this questions is from unofficial source, so, I dont want to discuss in dept
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Is it really from GMAC source ? I have a doubt about ..
Please clarify :

Because and as a result of / resulting from : Seems redundant to me . ( A & B )
' ....they .....so that ...' : C out
'...as a result of their...' : E out

D seems prefect and does not have any grammatical error .
B is not convincing answer and not expected even from GMAC bouncers . ;)
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The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction because, resulting from intensive inbreeding generations ago, the species has so little genetic variation that it is extremely vulnerable to environmental change.

I have two doubts in this question ,
1. If option E was worded - as a result of its intensive inbreeding generations ago, ( its instead of their and removed the word "and" ) would the option be correct?
2. Opt B - i am not clear why both " because" , "as result of " are required? , both words intend to state a reason . Hence i dint choose Option B.

Please clarify
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1. If option E was worded - as a result of its intensive inbreeding generations ago, ( its instead of their and removed the word "and" ) would the option be correct?
Hi Niveditha28, with the modifications that you've suggested, the sentence will be:

The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction as a result of its intensive inbreeding generations ago, the species has so little genetic variation that it is extremely vulnerable to environmental change.

This is an incorrect sentence because it is (what is called as) run-on sentence: Following two Independent clauses are connected by just a comma:

i) The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction as a result of its intensive inbreeding generations ago,
ii) The species has so little genetic variation that it is extremely vulnerable to environmental change.

You can watch our video on Independent and Dependent Clauses.

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2. Opt B - i am not clear why both " because" , "as result of " are required? , both words intend to state a reason . Hence i dint choose Option B.
because and as a result serve different purposes in this sentence:

because is modifying The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction; in other words, because is answering why cheetah seems to be headed for extinction

as a result is modifying the species has so little genetic variation; in other words, as a result is answering why the species has so little genetic variation.

p.s. Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana discusses run-on construct, its application and examples in significant detail. If you or someone is interested, PM me your email-id; I can mail the corresponding section.
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The cheetah seems to be headed for extinction because, resulting from intensive inbreeding generations ago, the species has so little genetic variation that it is extremely vulnerable to environmental change.


(A) because, resulting from intensive inbreeding generations ago,
(B) because, as a result of intensive inbreeding generations ago,
(C) because they inbred intensively generations ago so that
(D) because there was intensive inbreeding generations ago and
(E) as a result of their intensive inbreeding generations ago, and

What gives B a preference over A? I am not able to figure out. Is it that in A resulting is acting as a modifier of the species? But As a result of also implies the same. please help. IanStewart MartyTargetTestPrep egmat
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What gives B a preference over A? I am not able to figure out. Is it that in A resulting is acting as a modifier of the species? But As a result of also implies the same. please help.
In the (A) version, the participial phrase "resulting from intensive inbreeding generations ago" must modify "species." Consequently, the (A) version conveys the nonsensical meaning that the species resulted from inbreeding and, therefore, has little genetic variation.

Notice that a species could not result from its own inbreeding. The species would have to exist first and then inbreed.

In fact, the point to be made is that the lack of genetic variation resulted from inbreeding "generations ago," not that the species itself resulted from inbreeding.

In the (B) version, on the other hand, "as a result of intensive inbreeding generations ago" is synonymous with "because of intensive inbreeding generations ago" and acts adverbially to modify "has," indicating why the species "has so little genetic variation."

Thus, we can see that the (B) version conveys a meaning that makes sense.
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@e-gmat . Can you explain the reason why option B is correct and not option A
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