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IMO: B

Actually, this one is quite challenge for me because i don't know what the intended meaning is.
The author can think in two ways:
1)
Savion Glover aims to restore ...... by doing 2 things
- Eliminating ...
- to parallel it must be returning
So think in this way, only E and C. Between E and C. E is more preferable. However, i think that both C and E are really awkward :(. because i think if author wants to convey the meaning that to restore by doing 2 things, he should use focusing rather than returning.

2) Savion Glover aims to do 2 things:
- restore
- to parallel it must be return - So B.

Between B and E, i know for sure "focus on" is correct idiom and i think E is really awkward.

So B is my final answer.



Choreographer and dancer Savion Glover aims to restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures and he returns to a focus on the feet as the primary source of movement.

A) he returns to a focus on the feet -> Savion Glover does 2 things: 1) aim to restore 2) returns to a focus. I think this is not the intended meaning

B) return to a focus on the feet -> Savion Glover aims 2 things: 1) restore and 2) return to a focus. Correct

C) returning to the feet's focusing -> Savion Glover aims to restore.... by eliminating and returning but awkward
D) returned to the feet as a focus -> No reason to used Verbed .

E) returning that the feet be the focus -> -> Savion Glover aims to restore.... by eliminating and returning but awkward
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IMO B,

I was confused between A and B, but on seeing the comparison correctly marked B.

Savion Glover aims to
  • restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures and
  • he returns to a focus on the feet as the primary source of movement. [Incorrect Comparison]

Let us see which option has a correct X as parallel in restore and X

    A) he returns
    B) return [Only option that is parallel and makes sense here]
    C) returning
    D) returned
    E) Returning
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Choreographer and dancer Savion Glover aims to restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures and he returns to a focus on the feet as the primary source of movement.

Sentence Structure
Subject - Verb
    Choreographer and dancer Savion Glover aims to
      1) restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures and
      2) return to a focus on the feet as the primary source of movement.

Issues:
    We need a prepositional phrase which CAN be parallel either to restore or by eliminating
    However, the verb-ing form does NOT make any sense with the sentence.
    C and E Verb-ing from is NOT parallel

Answer choice analysis:
    A) he returns to a focus on the feet
      2 Independent clauses are connected by a mere connector AND.

    B) return to a focus on the feet
      Better than the rest. B is the winner!

    C) returning to the feet's focusing
      Verb-ing from is NOT parallel
      feet's focusing - focusing cannot be an inherent property of feet

    D) returned to the feet as a focus
      Meaning issue: D states that SG returned to the feet as the focus in the past, and then he tries to aim to restore.
      Also, at times, change in tense is allowed in the same sentence.
        Ex: The Earth revolves( present-tense) around the Sun and has continued( present-perfect-tense) to do so since the Big-Bang.
      However, in this case, it does NOT make any sense. Unsolicited tense-shift

    E) returning that the feet be the focus
      Verb-ing from is NOT parallel
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Choreographer and dancer Savion Glover aims to restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures and he returns to a focus on the feet as the primary source of movement.

A) he returns to a focus on the feet

B) return to a focus on the feet

C) returning to the feet's focusing

D) returned to the feet as a focus

E) returning that the feet be the focus

Choreographer and dancer Savion Glover aims to restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures and he returns to a focus on the feet as the primary source of movement.

Quote:
A) he returns to a focus on the feet

aims to restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures(X) and he returns (Y) are not parallel

Quote:
B) return to a focus on the feet

aims to restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures(X) and return to a focus on the feet (Y) are parallel


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C) returning to the feet's focusing

aims to restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures(X) and returning to the feet's focusing as the primary source of movement. (Y) are not parallel
returning to the feet's focusing as the primary source of movement is awkward.

Quote:
D) returned to the feet as a focus

aims to restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures(X) and returned to the feet as a focus as the primary source of movement. (Y) are not parallel

restore and returned are using different tenses.

Quote:
E) returning that the feet be the focus

aims to restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures(X) and returning that the feet be the focus as the primary source of movement. (Y) are not parallel
returning that the feet be the focus as the primary source of movement. is awkward.

IMO B
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IMO correct answer is B.

I was initially confused with parallelism between "eliminating" & "returning", now then i again found by the meaning of the context that these 2 can't be parallel; Savion Glover as a Subject taking singular verb aims & "to restore" to be made correct parallelism with return, which is present only in option B.


Choreographer and dancer Savion Glover aims to restore the African roots of tap dance by eliminating hand gestures and he returns to a focus on the feet as the primary source of movement.

A) he returns to a focus on the feet - " he returns to a focus on the feet" is not parallel with "aims to restore the African roots...." - Incorrect

B) return to a focus on the feet - Correct parallelism used

C) returning to the feet's focusing - "returning to the feet's focusing" is not parallel with the item before AND

D) returned to the feet as a focus - Same as C

E) returning that the feet be the focus - Same as C
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I have posted the official explanation HERE.
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I have doubt pertaining to parallelism, for which I get almost all parallelism questions wrong.

In the case at hand we have aims to restore X and Y
but when I first read the sentence what my mind noticed was the participle - eliminating - the most adjacent one to and

So how do I know whether I need to maintain parallelism with this word or the main verb

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I have doubt pertaining to parallelism, for which I get almost all parallelism questions wrong.

In the case at hand we have aims to restore X and Y
but when I first read the sentence what my mind noticed was the participle - eliminating - the most adjacent one to and

So how do I know whether I need to maintain parallelism with this word or the main verb

Please help
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So how do I know whether I need to maintain parallelism with this word or the main verb
It really depends on the most logical meaning. In some instances, it is very clear.

For example:

I want to build my body by going to the gym and study regularly.
- This is correct, since the intended meaning is that I want to do two things: 1) to build my body and 2) (to) study regularly

A better sentence would be where this parallelism is made more explicit:

I want to build my body by going to the gym and to study regularly.

Here, it is very clear the sentence cannot be:

I want to build my body by going to the gym and studying regularly.
- This would nonsensically suggest that studying regularly will enable me to build my body.

In the sentence under consideration, I would argue that returning would have worked as well, but all options using returning have other serious issues.
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I disagree that A is not parallel,
I think both A and B are parallel as per my home great ron purewal, parallelism is needed to be checked my Y to X,

"He returns" is perfectly parallel with "Savion Glovier aims".

However He returns to what ? A place, no a methodology doesn't seem okay. B eliminates this and that's why it is better than A

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