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Despite the criticism from professional reviewers regarding its lack of dazzle in comparison to what the iPhone 5 would bring, the
iPhone 4S was able to bring in customers in droves to buy it, aiding Apple in selling more than twice as many iPhones for the quarter ending in December as it did last year.
a) iPhone 4S was able to bring in customers in droves to buy it, aiding Apple in selling
b) iPhone 4S was able to bring in customers in droves to buy it and to aid Apple in selling
c) iPhone 4S was able to bring in customers in droves to buy it and it aided Apple to sell
d) customers came in droves to buy the iPhone 4S to aid Apple in selling
e) customers have come in droves to buy the iPhone 4S, aiding Apple to sell
a) iPhone 4S was able to bring in customers in droves to buy it, aiding Apple in selling --> No error
b) iPhone 4S was able to bring in customers in droves to buy it and
to aid Apple in selling--> Meaning error. The intent of iPhone 4s was not to help Apple to sell. iPhone helped in attracting customers, which in turn aided in selling.
c) iPhone 4S was able to bring in customers in droves to buy it and
it aided Apple to sell --> Same error as option b.
d)
customers came in droves to buy the iPhone 4S
to aid Apple in selling --> modifier issue. To show intended contrast iPhone should be used as the modified entity, not the customers. Also
to aid error as previous options.
e)
customers have come in droves to buy the iPhone 4S, aiding Apple to sell.
Modifier error, same as option d
Hope this helps.