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(E) The discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and the extent that is,

Is (E) wrong just because "is" after the extent is not in appropriate tense?
("is" should be the same tense as would be).
I'd add to what Ron said that, to convey the meaning conveyed by the correct version, the sentence does need to use the same tense in both the "grow warmer" clause and the "extent" clause since, in a sentence that conveys that meaning, both clauses would be about events in the same time period.

However, as Ron outlined, as written, the (E) version doesn't make sense, with the result that what tense the second clause should use is not clear. In other words, if we consider just the (E) version, we don't really have a solid basis for saying that the tense of the second clause is incorrect. We'd basically be saying that nonsense should have a certain tense.
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request to please explain how to identify right parallelism b/w B] and C]
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request to please explain how to identify right parallelism b/w B] and C]
Let's compare (B) and (C).

(B) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually had as its focus whether Earth would get warmer and what the extent would be,

(C) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and to what extent,


Both are OK in terms of parallelism specifically.

The problem with (B) is that the meaning conveyed is not clear. In (B) we have "whether Earth would get warmer and what the extent would be."

The (B) version leaves the reader wondering, "The extent of what?" since the sentence does not directly mention anything that there would be an extent of.

In (C), we have the following: "whether Earth would grow warmer and to what extent."

We can understand that to mean "whether Earth would grow warmer and to what extent (Earth would grow warmer)."

In other words, the (C) version provides something that would occur "to what extent."

The term for what we see in (C) is "ellipsis." Ellipsis is leaving out words whose meaning the sentence is understood to convey. Even though the words "Earth would grow warmer" are not written after "extent," they are understood to be conveyed.
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In option C , how is " whether Earth would grow warmer " is parallel to " to what extent "?
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In option C , how is " whether Earth would grow warmer " is parallel to " to what extent "?
"To what extent" is understood to meant "to what extent Earth would grow warmer."

So, the parallelism is between the noun clause "whether Earth would grow warmer" and the understood noun clause "to what extent (Earth would grow warmer)."
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Here is a detailed explanation to this question-
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Discussion of greenhouse effects have usually had as a focus the possibility of Earth growing warmer and to what extent it might, but climatologists have indicated all along that precipitation, storminess, and temperature extremes are likely to have the greatest impact on people.


(A) Discussion of greenhouse effects have usually had as a focus the possibility of Earth growing warmer and to what extent it might,

(B) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually had as its focus whether Earth would get warmer and what the extent would be,

(C) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and to what extent,

(D) The discussion of greenhouse effects have usually focused on the possibility of Earth getting warmer and to what extent it might,

(E) The discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and the extent that is,


Concepts tested here: Subject-Verb Agreement + Parallelism + Tenses + Awkwardness/Redundancy

• Any elements joined by a conjunction ("and" in this sentence) must be parallel.
• Future actions are conveyed through the simple future tense.
• The simple present tense is used to indicate actions taking place in the current time frame, indicate habitual actions, state universal truths, and convey information that is permanent in nature.

A: This answer choice incorrectly refers to the singular noun "Discussion" with the plural verb "have...had". Further, Option A fails to maintain parallelism between "the possibility of Earth growing warmer" and "to what extent it might"; remember, any elements joined by a conjunction ("and" in this sentence) must be parallel. Additionally, Option A uses the passive voice construction "had as a focus the possibility of Earth growing warmer", leading to awkwardness and redundancy.

B: This answer choice uses the passive voice construction "had as its focus", leading to awkwardness and redundancy.

C: Correct. This answer choice correctly refers to the singular noun "Discussion" with the singular verb "has...focused". Further, Option C correctly maintains parallelism between "whether Earth would grow warmer" and "to what extent". Additionally, Option C avoids the tense error seen in Option E, as it uses the noun phrase "to what extent" rather than a phrase that includes an active verb, such as "is" in Option E. Besides, Option C is free of any awkwardness or redundancy.

D: This answer choice incorrectly refers to the singular noun "Discussion" with the plural verb "have...focused". Further, Option D fails to maintain parallelism between "the possibility of Earth growing warmer" and "to what extent it might"; remember, any elements joined by a conjunction ("and" in this sentence) must be parallel.

E: This answer choice fails to maintain parallelism between "whether Earth would grow warmer" and "the extent that is"; remember, any elements joined by a conjunction ("and" in this sentence) must be parallel. Further, Option E incorrectly uses the simple present tense verb "is" to refer to a hypothetical future event; remember, future actions are conveyed through the simple future tense, and the simple present tense is used to indicate actions taking place in the current time frame, indicate habitual actions, state universal truths, and convey information that is permanent in nature.

Hence, C is the best answer choice.

To understand the concept of "Simple Tenses" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~2 minutes):



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Thank you for your helpful reply.

What is the rule around using "whether" vs "whether or not"?
I believe "whether or not" is idiomatic, but I have seen the use of "whether" alone as in this official example.

Thank you again.
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(C) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and to what extent,

can anybody explain the form of parallelism used here.
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(C) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and to what extent,

can anybody explain the form of parallelism used here.

Hello raaajx,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, here the parallelism is between the phrases "whether Earth would grow warmer" and "to what extent"; both phrase work with the preposition "on" to modify the verb "focused", conveying what topics the discussion focused on.

We hope this helps.
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Hello woohoo921

"whether or not" is redundant; the message "or not" is inherent in "whether".

Hence, answer choices using "whether or not" are not likely to be correct.

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Dear Friends,

Here is a detailed explanation to this question-
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Discussion of greenhouse effects have usually had as a focus the possibility of Earth growing warmer and to what extent it might, but climatologists have indicated all along that precipitation, storminess, and temperature extremes are likely to have the greatest impact on people.


(A) Discussion of greenhouse effects have usually had as a focus the possibility of Earth growing warmer and to what extent it might,

(B) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually had as its focus whether Earth would get warmer and what the extent would be,

(C) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and to what extent,

(D) The discussion of greenhouse effects have usually focused on the possibility of Earth getting warmer and to what extent it might,

(E) The discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and the extent that is,


Concepts tested here: Subject-Verb Agreement + Parallelism + Tenses + Awkwardness/Redundancy

• Any elements joined by a conjunction ("and" in this sentence) must be parallel.
• Future actions are conveyed through the simple future tense.
• The simple present tense is used to indicate actions taking place in the current time frame, indicate habitual actions, state universal truths, and convey information that is permanent in nature.

A: This answer choice incorrectly refers to the singular noun "Discussion" with the plural verb "have...had". Further, Option A fails to maintain parallelism between "the possibility of Earth growing warmer" and "to what extent it might"; remember, any elements joined by a conjunction ("and" in this sentence) must be parallel. Additionally, Option A uses the passive voice construction "had as a focus the possibility of Earth growing warmer", leading to awkwardness and redundancy.

B: This answer choice uses the passive voice construction "had as its focus", leading to awkwardness and redundancy.

C: Correct. This answer choice correctly refers to the singular noun "Discussion" with the singular verb "has...focused". Further, Option C correctly maintains parallelism between "whether Earth would grow warmer" and "to what extent". Additionally, Option C avoids the tense error seen in Option E, as it uses the noun phrase "to what extent" rather than a phrase that includes an active verb, such as "is" in Option E. Besides, Option C is free of any awkwardness or redundancy.

D: This answer choice incorrectly refers to the singular noun "Discussion" with the plural verb "have...focused". Further, Option D fails to maintain parallelism between "the possibility of Earth growing warmer" and "to what extent it might"; remember, any elements joined by a conjunction ("and" in this sentence) must be parallel.

E: This answer choice fails to maintain parallelism between "whether Earth would grow warmer" and "the extent that is"; remember, any elements joined by a conjunction ("and" in this sentence) must be parallel. Further, Option E incorrectly uses the simple present tense verb "is" to refer to a hypothetical future event; remember, future actions are conveyed through the simple future tense, and the simple present tense is used to indicate actions taking place in the current time frame, indicate habitual actions, state universal truths, and convey information that is permanent in nature.

Hence, C is the best answer choice.

To understand the concept of "Simple Tenses" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~2 minutes):



All the best!
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Thank you for your helpful reply.

What is the rule around using "whether" vs "whether or not"?
I believe "whether or not" is idiomatic, but I have seen the use of "whether" alone as in this official example.

Thank you again.
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(C) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and to what extent,

can anybody explain the form of parallelism used here.


Hello @raaajax,

Hope you are doing well. I will be happy to help you with this one. :)


The elements that are parallel in the list are as follows: Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on

    whether Earth would grow warmer
    (whether Earth would grow warmer) to what extent,

The focus of the discussion is on two points:

1. Will the Earth grow warmer?
2. To what extent will the Earth go warmer?


Choice C is structured in a way to incorporate the two elements in a very precise manner. The list appears grammatically unparallel, but it is a parallel list.


Hope this helps. :)
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Discussion of greenhouse effects have usually had as a focus the possibility of Earth growing warmer and to what extent it might, but climatologists have indicated all along that precipitation, storminess, and temperature extremes are likely to have the greatest impact on people.


(A) Discussion of greenhouse effects have usually had as a focus the possibility of Earth growing warmer and to what extent it might,

(B) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually had as its focus whether Earth would get warmer and what the extent would be,

(C) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and to what extent,

(D) The discussion of greenhouse effects have usually focused on the possibility of Earth getting warmer and to what extent it might,

(E) The discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and the extent that is,


Hi KarishmaB, can you please help me understand below?

Option C says Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on...

My reasoning for eliminating C was that S-V don't make sense together as how can discussion focus on something, instead shouldnt it be more like option B which says that discussion has had as its focus
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Discussion of greenhouse effects have usually had as a focus the possibility of Earth growing warmer and to what extent it might, but climatologists have indicated all along that precipitation, storminess, and temperature extremes are likely to have the greatest impact on people.


(A) Discussion of greenhouse effects have usually had as a focus the possibility of Earth growing warmer and to what extent it might,

(B) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually had as its focus whether Earth would get warmer and what the extent would be,

(C) Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and to what extent,

(D) The discussion of greenhouse effects have usually focused on the possibility of Earth getting warmer and to what extent it might,

(E) The discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on whether Earth would grow warmer and the extent that is,


Hi KarishmaB, can you please help me understand below?

Option C says Discussion of greenhouse effects has usually focused on...

My reasoning for eliminating C was that S-V don't make sense together as how can discussion focus on something, instead shouldnt it be more like option B which says that discussion has had as its focus

Just like a book can talk about ... and a result can suggest ..., a discussion can focus on ...
Nothing wrong with it. Anthropomorphism is the attribution of human characteristics to nonhuman entities, objects, or concepts and is very common.
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