Skywalker18 wrote:
Ever since the concussion risks associated with playing tackle football
became more widely known, many parents have elected to sign their children up for sports that were less dangerous, such as soccer or tennis.
A) became more widely known, many parents have elected to sign their children up for sports that were less dangerous, such as - "sports that were less dangerous" is incorrect as the fact should still be true since parents began to enroll their kids in tennis and soccer in the past and are still continuing to do so today
B) became more widely known, many parents have elected to sign up their children for less dangerous sports, including - Correct
C) have become more widely known, many parents elected to sign their children up for less dangerous sports, such as - tense issue- present perfect tense needed for "many parents elected"
D) have become more widely known, many parents have elected to sign their children up for sports that were less dangerous, including - same issue with that modifies as in A
E) have become more widely known, many parents elected to sign up their children for less dangerous sports, such as - tense issue- present perfect tense needed for "many parents elected"
Answer B
XavierAlexander wrote:
The core sentence reads: Ever since the risks became known, parents have elected to … . Became and have become are both acceptable in this sentence—either one can logically describe when the continuing time period indicated by ever since began. For example, ever since she has been working out… and ever since she started working out… are both valid constructions.
As per the OE posted above, either present perfect tense or simple past tense is acceptable in the first part of the sentence(Ever since ... widely known), but in opinion, the first part should be in simple past.
Your point is interesting. In some cases, it may make sense to use the present perfect in a clause that begins with "since." For instance, one could potentially argue that the following makes sense.
Since James has been working here, the team has been having much more fun.I personally am not sure that I like it, but I'm sure that many people, including many English experts, would say that it is OK, as it conveys that ever since an ongoing action started, something else has been going on.
However, the following does not make sense.
Ever since the concussion risks of football have become more widely known, parents have elected to sign their children up for less dangerous sports.The process of the risks becoming more widely known is not the same as "James has been working here." If James has been working somewhere, he started at a certain point and has been working ever since. The concussion risks becoming more widely known is not a binary change like James not working and then working. It's an ongoing change. It does not make sense to say "Since" an ongoing change. For instance, the following is not optimal.
Ever since it has become increasingly apparent that oil company executives don't care about the environment, local organizations have been forming to protect water supplies.We would be better off with the following.
As it has become increasingly apparent that oil company executives don't care about the environment, local organizations have been forming to protect water supplies.Let's use "as" in the concussions sentence.
As the concussion risks of football have become more widely known, parents have elected to sign their children up for less dangerous sports.That's better, but the second clause does not quite match the first. It might be even better if we show that the parents part is an ongoing change as well.
As the concussion risks of football have become more widely known, the percentage of parents electing to sign their children up for less dangerous sports has increased.So, the answer seems to be that, while in certain cases it may make sense to use the present perfect in a clause that begins with "since," for the purposes of describing the type of scenario described by the sentence in this question, it probably does not make sense to use the present perfect after "ever since," and it would be better to use "as" than to use "since."