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# How do you understand this kind of structure...? Beatrix

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How do you understand this kind of structure...? Beatrix [#permalink]

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How do you understand this kind of structure...?

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

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Re: SC - Beatrix Potter [#permalink]

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20 Sep 2008, 10:39
Richardson wrote:
How do you understand this kind of structure...?

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

We dont need coordinating because its clearly a past event. A & B are out

In D Carefully coordinated with her narratives, should modify books and NOT BP. D is out

C looks really weird to me

E looked ok but if I take out the Dependent clause "in her book illustrations" The sentence does not read well.

What is the OA?
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Re: SC - Beatrix Potter [#permalink]

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20 Sep 2008, 11:05
Richardson wrote:
How do you understand this kind of structure...?

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

IMO C)

In E) Beatrix Potter carefully coordinated them does not make sense.

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