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After answering the aforementioned question could you please answer the following:

1) What is the tense of "be" - past tense, present tense or ?? I recognize that it is passive voice....

2) Why would this not be a "hypothetical" situation and hence the usage of "was" would automatically be wrong, no? I guess i'm confused as to what you'd call a hypothetical situation [which requires the need for If i were (Vs using was) you....] and why isnt the hypothetical case applicable here.
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shoot is not in present tense. It is accompanied by would (model verb).

It is simple.

2 forms, sunjunctive and indictive

indictive means, the possibility is very high.

Indictive - why and reason... cause and effect...
If you score high in GMAT, you will be selected in a business school.

subjuctive, possibility is low or rare...hypotheical....

If I had scored high in GMAT, I would had been selected in a business school.
If you were a king, youwould have ruled the whole world.

Meaning, some condition that is hypothical.

But if the whole sentence is in present tense, it need to maintain the tense.

be is present
was is past
been is future...

in this present question, we are saying that if Dr. wade is right, the situation will happen or will not happen...
Dr. Wade has already proven it...

If you want to convert it to sunjunctive then

If Dr. Wade were right, any apperent connection between X and Y would be purely coincidental.
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Had Dr. Wade been right, any apperent connection between X and Y would had been purely coincidental.

Hope it helps.
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this purely a conditional but not a subjunctive (hypothetical or contrary to fact) one. e.g.

if it were a subjunctive, it would have "were" as verb in the first clause.
it is not a subjunctive, it is perfectly ok with is as verb in the first clause. :wink:

So, D is correct.
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Hi all, my doubt is,
1) Isn't excelling at sports a complex gerund? For example, drinking of the water.
2) Are complex gerunds always in the from of an Of-phrase?
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Hi all, my doubt is,
1) Isn't excelling at sports a complex gerund? For example, drinking of the water.
2) Are complex gerunds always in the from of an Of-phrase?

Hi there,


(1). Complex gerund is "The excelling at sports" and not "excelling at sports". Furthermore,

Often the construction of CG is "Article -Ing Preposition", but you cannot generalize it( This answers your second doubt)\

Excelling at sports is a simple gerund because we can use it as:

I am excelling at sports

Simple gerunds are Verb-like as shown above.

Complex gerunds are noun-like that is why when we want to adhere to parallelism , we make Complex Gerund parallel to action nouns not the simple gerunds parallel to action nouns.


Hope that helps!
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A. 'eating of' is wrong
B. 'connection of' is wrong
C. 'eating of' is wrong
D. sounds fine; uses the idiom (between... and...) and parallelism (eating... excelling..) correctly
E. perfect tense is wrong as the main clause uses simple present 'is coincidental'
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can any one explain why c is wrong. it corrects the Dr wade WAS to IS. secondly use proper idiom between thirdly the parallelism is ok "eating of" and "excelling at". and fourth "connection this is apparent" is also fine and is equal to "apparent connection"
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In official guide they have given below reason why E is incorrect:

Should Dr. Wade have been right should not be followed by the present
indicative verb is.

Can you pls explain this more
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KARISHMA315, the idea is that the clauses should match. "Should Dr. Wade have been right" introduces a conditional that should be followed by "any connection . . would have been coincidental" (if we're talking about a past connection) or "would be coincidental" (if we're talking about a current/future connection).
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Got it correct but still thinking about why "eating" which is a verb is parallel to a gerund "excelling"?

Or maybe I am a doing a mistake of thinking "eating" as a verb instead of a "modifier"?

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If Dr. Wade was right, any apparent connection of the eating of highly processed foods and excelling at sports is purely coincidental.

The scentence intended to convey the meaning that if Dr.wade was right, the connection between eating highly processed foods and excelling at sports is coincidental)

(A) If Dr. Wade was right, any apparent connection of the eating of

(1."of the eating" does not make sense; 2. "of the eating... and excelling at sports" does not comply with parallelism; 3."between" should be the right word in the context. Eliminate)

(B) Should Dr. Wade be right, any apparent connection of eating (This expresssion is awkward and not idiomatic, eliminate)

(C) If Dr. Wade is right, any connection that is apparent between eating of (as an adjective, "apparent" should refer to connection, so it needs to be placed before connection. eliminate)

(D) If Dr. Wade is right, any apparent connection between eating

(E) Should Dr.Wade have been right, any connection apparent between eating (Same reason as choice C. Also, the use of perfect tense is awkward)
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If Dr. Wade was right, any apparent connection of the eating of highly processed foods and excelling at sports is purely coincidental.


(A) If Dr. Wade was right, any apparent connection of the eating of

(B) Should Dr. Wade be right, any apparent connection of eating

(C) If Dr. Wade is right, any connection that is apparent between eating of

(D) If Dr. Wade is right, any apparent connection between eating

(E) Should Dr.Wade have been right, any connection apparent between eating

Dear Experts,

Apart from wordier in (C), the main reason to eliminate is “eating of”, right? : eating highly processed foods conveyed the meaning “eat processed food” but eating of highly processed foods conveyed the meaning “processed foods is a subject that perform action of “eat”” Then, (C) is wrong. Am I correct?

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If Dr. Wade was right, any apparent connection of the eating of highly processed foods and excelling at sports is purely coincidental.


(A) If Dr. Wade was right, any apparent connection of the eating of

(B) Should Dr. Wade be right, any apparent connection of eating

(C) If Dr. Wade is right, any connection that is apparent between eating of

(D) If Dr. Wade is right, any apparent connection between eating

(E) Should Dr.Wade have been right, any connection apparent between eating

Dear Experts,

Apart from wordier in (C), the main reason to eliminate is “eating of”, right? : eating highly processed foods conveyed the meaning “eat processed food” but eating of highly processed foods conveyed the meaning “processed foods is a subject that perform action of “eat”” Then, (C) is wrong. Am I correct?

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Hello Tanchat,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, no; your reasoning is not exactly correct here; Option C actually leads to an incoherent meaning, as it uses the simple gerund "eating"; to convey the intended meaning, a complex gerund - one preceded by a preposition - is needed.

We hope this helps.
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If Dr. Wade was right, any apparent connection of the eating of highly processed foods and excelling at sports is purely coincidental.


(A) If Dr. Wade was right, any apparent connection of the eating of

(B) Should Dr. Wade be right, any apparent connection of eating

(C) If Dr. Wade is right, any connection that is apparent between eating of

(D) If Dr. Wade is right, any apparent connection between eating

(E) Should Dr.Wade have been right, any connection apparent between eating

Dear Experts,

Apart from wordier in (C), the main reason to eliminate is “eating of”, right? : eating highly processed foods conveyed the meaning “eat processed food” but eating of highly processed foods conveyed the meaning “processed foods is a subject that perform action of “eat”” Then, (C) is wrong. Am I correct?

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Hello Tanchat,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, no; your reasoning is not exactly correct here; Option C actually leads to an incoherent meaning, as it uses the simple gerund "eating"; to convey the intended meaning, a complex gerund - one preceded by a preposition - is needed.

We hope this helps.
All the best!
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Thank you for the response. But I do still not understand. What is difference between the meaning of (C) and the meaning of (D)?

Also, what is difference between “eat” and “eating of”?
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Thank you for the response. But I do still not understand. What is difference between the meaning of (C) and the meaning of (D)?

Also, what is difference between “eat” and “eating of”?

Hello Tanchat,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, due to the construction of the phrase "between eating of", Option C actually produces an incoherent meaning.

Further, "eat" is an active verb, and "eating of" is a present participle ("verb+ing") phrase that acts as a gerund.

We hope this helps.
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