In June 2012, the Rhode Island General Assembly had voted to repeal a law enacted in 1989 that made lying online a misdemeanor, citing the illogic of trying to enforce something that is so often innocently violated.
A) had voted to repeal a law enacted in 1989 that made lying online a misdemeanor, citing the illogic of trying to enforce something that is so often
B) voted to repeal a law enacted in 1989 that made lying online a misdemeanor, citing the illogic of trying to enforce something that is so often
C) had voted to repeal a law enacted in 1989 that made lying online a misdemeanor, citing the illogic of the trying to enforce something that is so often
d) voted in favor of to repeal a law enacted in 1989 that has made lying online a misdemeanor, citing the illogic of attempting to enforce something that is so often
E) voted for repealing a law enacted in 1989 that had made lying online a misdemeanor, having cited the illogic of trying to enforce something that is so often
ANS:
Let us read and deconstruct it first:
In June 2012, ( Oh something happened in 2012- look out for what.)
the Rhode Island General Assembly had voted ( SV pair. We have "had + Past Participle form of verb -> Past perfect tense is used so we are expected to find a later event for its usage generally.)
to repeal a law ( What Rhode island folks did? They voted to repeal a law). Sounds OK)
enacted (Verb + ED modifier modify "law" ) in 1989
that ( refer to "law")
made ( SV pair: Law made ) lying online a misdemeanor,
citing the illogic of trying to enforce something that is so often innocently violated ( Verb + ING modifier - provides extra info about the preceding clause )
Error Analysis: Sentence looks fine meaning wise. But usage of "had voted" is not correct. We use past perfect to present sequence of events for related events to clarify to reader in which sequence the past two actions occurred. Here, Voting happened after law was enacted >logical information flow. Also the information is correctly presented using time marker in form of years. ( in 2012 and in 1989). So "had voted" is incorrect to denote later action.
A) Error as pointed above: Tense usage.
B) Correct the error of original sentence - Option A. Hold on
C) Same error as A "Had voted" usage is not correct. Look further usage of article "the". "
the trying to enforce something" >> Was there any particular "trying to enforce something .... " - no such thing is mentioned. Inferior to B. Eliminate.
D) Original sentence error is resolved. Nice but new errors introduced. "voted in favour of to repeal a law" is wordy and messier to communicate same idea compared to option B, which is clean. "that has made lying" - present perfect use to tell that the effect of the law is still present but the law was repealed in 2012 so effect is not present logically till now. Tense error. ( Just for fun: Unless the sentence was written in 2012 just after the law was repealed and the actual fact/news got buried and did not reach you and some effect still prevailed ?? >> too much thinking
Be logical, its GMAT
) Usage of "attempting" vs "trying" - i will not think too much about it. There are bigger issues in this sentence - Eliminate.
E) "Voted for repeaing" vs "voted to repeal" -> voted to is better but as Charles Aka GMAT Ninja has told multiple times , we are not here to learn all idioms. So find more things to eliminate. "had made" usage is correct - tell us about a past event -> law was made and now repealed ( later event). Some could argue and say we have a time marker present ( in 1989) so past perfect is not required. Well , i won't be 100% confident by its presence personally to eliminate the option. Yeah, a bit redundant compared to option B which is far clear and superior. (+1 vote to B)
"Having cited .... " > so someone cited illogic... >> i expect another action since “Having verb-ed” form always indicates an action completed before another action. So basically sentence says "having cited..... " Someone did some action. Lets us see who could do the other action. Probably "Rhode island general assembly" but it does not make sense to say that "having cited... " ,Rhode island assembly voted to repeal the law..... >> distort meaning and does not make sense - eliminate ( Probably my thought train got longer than expected but i hope you find it valuable
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So Mark B . Note down your learnings and go ahead to infinity and beyond