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In preparation for the cold winter months, it was the usual custom for prehistoric people to gather and preserve, with smoke or by salting it, as much meat that they could during the summer.
(A) it was the usual custom for prehistoric people to gather and preserve, with smoke or by salting it, as much meat that they could during the summer.
(B) prehistoric people usually gathered as much meat as they could during the summer, preserving it either by smoking or salting
(C) it was the usual custom of prehistoric people to gather and preserve, either with smoke or by salting, as much meat that they could during the summer
(D) prehistoric people had the usual custom of gathering and preserving as much meat, either by smoking or salting it, as they could during the summer
(E) it was usually that prehistoric people would gather and preserve as much meat as they could, which was either smoked or salted during the summer
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First, the Modifier during the summer is intended to modify the actions of gathering and preserving meat, but is placed instead between two constructions that it doesn’t modify. As a result, the sentence appears to be saying that the cold winter months occurred during the summer, or else that the actions described were only customary during the summer. Also, the initial modifier (in preparation for the cold winter months) should be placed next to the action that it modifies. The original also has problems with Parallelism: with smoke and by salting it are not properly parallel. Finally, usual custom is a redundant construction.
(A) This choice is incorrect as it repeats the original sentence.
(B) CORRECT. Both modifiers are placed correctly: in preparation for the cold winter months is correctly placed next to the actions that it describes, as is during the summer. Additionally, by smoking and by salting are properly parallel, and the redundant descriptor usual has been removed.
(C) The initial modifier is still misplaced; it should be placed next to the actions undertaken in preparation for winter, not next to the statement that it was the custom…. Additionally, with smoke and by salting are not properly parallel. Finally, this choice introduces an idiom error: as much is incorrectly paired with that (rather than the correct form, as much as).
(D) The modifier during the summer is placed improperly, suggesting that these actions ceased to be customary once summer ended. In addition, the presence of it destroys parallelism between smoking and salting it.
(E) The initial modifier is still misplaced; it should be placed next to the actions undertaken in preparation for winter, not next to the statement that it was usual…. In addition, the which modifier is not placed next to a noun, so it doesn’t logically modify anything; it should be placed next to meat. Finally, the use of the passive voice, while not ungrammatical or unidiomatic, alters the meaning; this usage creates a sentence in which we don’t know who smoked or salted the meat.
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it cannot be D .to understand as why d is wrong we need to understand as why parallelism is wrong in D . here "gathering" and "preserving" are not two independent ideas .u can gather something to preserve but u cannot gather and preserve
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In preparation for the cold winter months, it was the usual custom for prehistoric people to gather and preserve, with smoke or by salting it, as much meat that they could during the summer.
(A) it was the usual custom for prehistoric people to gather and preserve, with smoke or by salting it, as much meat that they could during the summer. (B) prehistoric people usually gathered as much meat as they could during the summer, preserving it either by smoking or salting (C) it was the usual custom of prehistoric people to gather and preserve, either with smoke or by salting, as much meat that they could during the summer (D) prehistoric people had the usual custom of gathering and preserving as much meat, either by smoking or salting it, as they could during the summer (E) it was usually that prehistoric people would gather and preserve as much meat as they could, which was either smoked or salted during the summer
Hi, I added this because the previous post doesn't have the OA.
D is too wordy in "had the usual custom" and can be effectively changed by "usually" in B. Moreover the verb ("gathered") in B is more preferable than noun ("gathering") in D in term of conciseness
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jlgdr wrote:
Any expert opinion on why B over D?
Thanks in advance! Cheers J
The sentence starts with "In preparation for the cold winter months" which should modify "prehistoric people". Hence option A, C and E are out. Option E - prehistoric people had the usual custom of gathering and preserving as much meat, either by smoking or salting it, as they could during the summer. The sentence incorrectly uses past perfect. This incorrectly signifies that its not the custom anymore which is not intended meaning in the original sentence. The actual meaning just talks about "In preparation for X, Y gather meat and preserve it by smoking and salting". Also D is incorrect because it conveys that people gather and preserve meat by smoking and salting. Ideally people preserve meat by smoking and salting and not gather meat. Option B corrects all the errors. Hence correct. Hope that helps.
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jlgdr wrote:
Any expert opinion on why B over D?
Thanks in advance! Cheers J
The sentence starts with "In preparation for the cold winter months" which should modify "prehistoric people". Hence option A, C and E are out. Option E - prehistoric people had the usual custom of gathering and preserving as much meat, either by smoking or salting it, as they could during the summer. The sentence incorrectly uses past perfect. This incorrectly signifies that its not the custom anymore which is not intended meaning in the original sentence. The actual meaning just talks about "In preparation for X, Y gather meat and preserve it by smoking and salting". Also D is incorrect because it conveys that people gather and preserve meat by smoking and salting. Ideally people preserve meat by smoking and salting and not gather meat. Option B corrects all the errors. Hence correct. Hope that helps.
I think, the last reason for eliminating 'D' is to the point. But, I think, the use of 'had' is ok in this sentence as it is not used as past perfect but instead used as simple past 'had'. For example: He had it (or) They had it.
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the later part of option B is not correct .it has a faulty parallelism .i don't think GMAC will make such an error in official problem .the later part of B should have been "either by smoking or by smoking"
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Doesn't option B change the meaning of the sentence by stating that "prehistoric people usually gathered..." vs. "prehistoric people had the usual custom of gathering..." Having a usual custom of doing something seems to communicate something different from usually doing something.
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In preparation for the cold winter months, it was the usual custom for prehistoric people to gather and preserve, with smoke or by salting it, as much meat that they could during the summer.
(A) it was the usual custom for prehistoric people to gather and preserve, with smoke or by salting it, as much meat that they could during the summer. Wrong. "as much ... that they could" is not idiomatic --> correct syntax is "as much.... as....." In addition, "gathering" and "preserving" MUST be SEPARATED --> See explanation in D.
(B) prehistoric people usually gathered as much meat as they could during the summer, preserving it either by smoking or salting Correct. "as much .... as" is good. "either by smoking || salting" --> keeps parallel structure.
(C) it was the usual custom of prehistoric people to gather and preserve, either with smoke or by salting, as much meat that they could during the summer Wrong. "either X or Y" --> X and Y must be parallel, but "with smoke" and "by salting" are not parallel. In addition, "gathering" and "preserving" MUST be SEPARATED --> See explanation in D.
(D) prehistoric people had the usual custom of gathering and preserving as much meat, either by smoking or salting it, as they could during the summer Wrong. "gathering" and "preserving" MUST be SEPARATED. Correct meaning is "gather as much meat as they could" and "preserve it either by smoking or salting". D, however, means (1) people gather meat either by smoking or salting + (2) preserve meat either by smoking or salting <-- totally wrong meaning.
(E) it was usually that prehistoric people would gather and preserve as much meat as they could, which was either smoked or salted during the summer Wrong. "which" is wrong.
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pqhai wrote:
In preparation for the cold winter months, it was the usual custom for prehistoric people to gather and preserve, with smoke or by salting it, as much meat that they could during the summer.
(A) it was the usual custom for prehistoric people to gather and preserve, with smoke or by salting it, as much meat that they could during the summer. Wrong. "as much ... that they could" is not idiomatic --> correct syntax is "as much.... as....." In addition, "gathering" and "preserving" MUST be SEPARATED --> See explanation in D.
(B) prehistoric people usually gathered as much meat as they could during the summer, preserving it either by smoking or salting Correct. "as much .... as" is good. "either by smoking || salting" --> keeps parallel structure.
(C) it was the usual custom of prehistoric people to gather and preserve, either with smoke or by salting, as much meat that they could during the summer Wrong. "either X or Y" --> X and Y must be parallel, but "with smoke" and "by salting" are not parallel. In addition, "gathering" and "preserving" MUST be SEPARATED --> See explanation in D.
(D) prehistoric people had the usual custom of gathering and preserving as much meat, either by smoking or salting it, as they could during the summer Wrong. "gathering" and "preserving" MUST be SEPARATED. Correct meaning is "gather as much meat as they could" and "preserve it either by smoking or salting". D, however, means (1) people gather meat either by smoking or salting + (2) preserve meat either by smoking or salting <-- totally wrong meaning.
(E) it was usually that prehistoric people would gather and preserve as much meat as they could, which was either smoked or salted during the summer Wrong. "which" is wrong.
Hope it helps.
B : either by smoking or salting???? parallel?
should be either " by either smoking or salting" or "either by smoking or by salting"
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Yes - You are correct in mentioning the parallel structure. This option is the most appropriate among the five options. (Meaning wise most clear of the five options)
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In preparation for the cold winter months, prehistoric people usually gathered as much meat as they could during the summer, preserving it either by smoking or salting Is it parallel? If it's twice inside then it should be " either by smoking or by salting" or Once outside, then it should be "preserving it by either smoking or salting" Kindly advise adkikaniabhimahnaGMATNinjadaagh
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In preparation for the cold winter months, prehistoric people usually gathered as much meat as they could during the summer, preserving it either by smoking or salting Is it parallel? If it's twice inside then it should be " either by smoking or by salting" or Once outside, then it should be "preserving it by either smoking or salting" Kindly advise adkikaniabhimahnaGMATNinjadaagh
Very well observed I guess this answer choice is correct because it is the best expression of the ideas as compared to the other answer choices, which clearly fail to do so.