Narenn
sorry if I missed but which schools you got in to? What are your post MBA goals and why you thought that the schools you chose to apply were right for your post MBA aspirations? When people read MBA debriefs they want to know what successful applicants did differently, how they chose their schools, crafted their story, or prepared for interviews. We expect a debrief writer should touch these crucial points in his/her debrief.
PS: I renamed the topic title; This forum is not for admission consultant reviews.
I applied to schools mostly ranked between 5 to 12 (Booth, MIT, Kellogg, LBS, Ross, Fuqua, Yale). Recd 2 interview invites and converted one of these. I was an ex-consultant and looking to enter into PE/VC (interning at a tech VC this summer) or stay in management consulting post business school. As I mentioned above on school selection, the key point was to diversify my risks by applying to more number of schools, preferably in R1, to hedge my bets (I applied to Kellogg, Tuck and INSEAD last year).
Hope I covered other points around story or interview preparation in my writeup earlier.