Linking arrangements among secondary schools and the workplace never evolved in the United States as they have in most other developed countries. (A) among secondary schools and the workplace never evolved in the United States as they have (B) in the United States among secondary schools and the workplace never evolved as they did (C) between secondary schools and the workplace never evolved in the United States as (D) in the United States between secondary schools and the workplace never evolved as they have (E) between secondary schools and the workplace never evolved in the United States as they did SC48420.01 OG2020 NEW QUESTION Diction; Verb Form The sentence presents a contrast between the United States and other countries with respect to the relationship (or lack thereof) between school and workplace. The sentence has two flaws. The first flaw is the use of among , which should be used to indicate only a relationship of more than two entities. Here, the use of among suggests a relationship among secondary schools. But the intended relationship is between two entities: secondary schools on the one hand and the workplace on the other. The preposition between is a better usage. The second flaw relates to the use of have . It would be appropriate as a proxy for a preceding occurrence of the past-perfect verb have evolved , rather than the simple-past verb from, evolved , used in the first part of the sentence. The simple-past verb form did is a better proxy for evolved . (A) The sentence is flawed in the ways explained. (B) The default reading of the phrase in the United States would treat it as a modifier of arrangements , but this reading is nonsensical in the context of the sentence as a whole; it makes no sense to say that linking arrangements in the United States have evolved in other countries. The parallelism that would help to highlight the intended comparison is lost. Also, the preposition among is not correct, for the reason explained above. (C) This can convey what is likely an unintended meaning : that the linking arrangements never evolved in the United States and never evolved in most other developed countries . (D) The default reading of the phrase in the United States would treat it as a modifier of arrangements , but this reading is nonsensical in the context of the sentence as a whole; it makes no sense to say that linking arrangements in the United States have evolved in other countries. The phrase would be better treated as an adverbial modifier of the verb evolved . The parallelism that would help to highlight the comparison is lost. (E) Correct . None of the flaws identified above, nor any other flaw, is present here.

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in comparision and ellipsis, remember what is omitted and what is retained in the second part of comparison. keep it in mind and you will pass the cheating minor errors.

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Can someone explain why is "they" in E is correct. Shouldn't "those" be more appropriate here to create a copy of Linking arrangements in most other developed countries. . "They" will just replace with linking arrangements done in US, which seems off to me.
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Firstly, we don't do SC by trying to prescribe how the sentence ought to be written. Our job is to pick the best of the answer choices.

Secondly, no, 'those' will not be more appropriate. The reason is that the sentence is talking about 'linking arrangements' in general, not about particular instances or sets of linking arrangements.

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Hi utkarsh27,

To add to vv65's point, we should keep in mind that in the United States isn't actually part of the subject. That means we should read the sentence like this:

1. {XYZ} never evolved in the United States as {they} did in most other developed countries.