OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Day 165: Sentence Correction (SC1)
For a quick POE, scroll down to the next
GREEN HEADINGTHE PROMPTQuote:
Modeling the formation of the terrestrial and gas
giants is relatively straightforward and uncontroversial because the terrestrial planets of the solar system are widely understood to have formed through the collision of micro-planets within the newly formed disk of gas surrounding the sun.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) giants
is relatively straightforward and uncontroversial because the terrestrial planets of the solar system are widely understood to have formed through
the collision of micro-planets-- the subject is
modeling (the plural noun giants, which appears immediately before the verb, is part of the complete subject).
--
modeling is a gerund (a verbING), and gerunds are always singular, so the correct verb is the singular IS
-- collision (dedicated noun) is more idiomatic than colliding (___ING verb-like noun form). Dedicated nouns are preferred to gerunds.
Quote:
B) giants is relatively straightforward and uncontroversial because the terrestrial planets of the solar system [verb?] widely understood to have formed through the
micro-planets' colliding--
terrestrial planets . . . . widely understood is missing a verb!
-- micro-planets' colliding?
1) collision, as in Option A, is better than __ING collding; and
2) inanimate objects, especially if plural, should be written as Y of the Xs (collision of micro-planets)
rather than Xs' Y (micro-planets' colliding)
Quote:
C) giants
are relatively straightforward and uncontroversial because the terrestrial planets of the solar system are widely understood to have formed through
the colliding of micro-planets
--
Modeling (the formation) . . . is a singular subject. The verb ARE is incorrect
-- the dedicated noun
collision, as in option A, is preferred to the __ING noun form
collidingQuote:
D) giants
are relatively straightforward and uncontroversial because
the solar system's terrestrial planets are understood
widely to have formed through the collision of micro-planets
-- plural verb ARE is fatal
-- words in pink typeface are clumsy compared to their counterparts in option A
Quote:
E) giants is relatively straightforward and uncontroversial because
of the wide understanding that the
formation of the terrestrial planets of the solar system
were caused by the collision of micro-planets
--
formation is singular. Its verb should be
was. (Long prepositional phrases are often used by GMAC to hide the subject)
-- words in pink: compare to option A. Option A says the same thing as E in fewer words and more clearly.
Almost always, the most efficient way to answer SC questions is to use "splits," a method described in these three very good articles:
(1) GMAT Sentence Correction Strategies,
here;
(2) Using Splits on GMAT Sentence Correction,
here; and
(3) How to Read a GMAT SC Problem,
here..
Using splits is not always possible. Harder questions often cannot be solved using splits because the test writers don't group any errors or they do group errors but the errors are written differently in each incorrect response, so our eyes can't spot the grouping.
This question is good for using splits on the first pass to eliminate two answers. After that, it's probably easiest to compare one answer to another.
Quick POE• Split #1: subject/verb agreementModeling . . . IS, not
Modeling . . . areEliminate options C and D, which incorrectly pair the singular subject
modeling with the plural verb
are• Split #2: the missing verbOption A:
the terrestrial planets of the solar system are widely understood to have XYZedOption B:
the terrestrial planets of the solar system widely understood to have XYZedEliminate Option B because it is missing the verb ARE.
• Split #3: Subject/verb agreementOption A:
formation . . . wasOption E:
formation . . . wereEliminate option E, which incorrectly pairs singular subject
formation with plural verb
wereBy POE, the answer is AIn this question, the splits are clean cut—that is, subject/verb agreement and a missing verb are clear errors.
The articles above discuss splits that are less clean cut and how to handle them.
One of the tricks in any standardized test is to avoid getting stuck or frozen. If you can't see a clear split, use an educated guess.
In option B, for example, some people noticed and did not like option B's use of
the micro-planets' colliding.Good instincts.
The dedicated noun
collision is preferred to the ___ING form
colliding. Plural possessives are correct only about 30 percent of the time.
-- That estimate may be high.
MGMAT says 20%.
-- And if all else is equal, the better way to indicate possession when inanimate things are involved is to use Y of the Xs rather than Xs' Y.
I think almost everyone eventually caught that option B was missing a verb, but I think B's clumsy construction caught attention first. That fact is just fine. Do whatever it takes to keep your mind from freezing.
COMMENTSthinkvision (cool username), welcome to SC Butler.
I really enjoy reading the "extra" comments people make.
Kudos to all because with varying degrees of success, everyone explained (even if someone did take a well-deserved break or slid in after the 24-hour mark

).
Nice work, all.