sudarshan22 wrote:
Project SC Butler: Day 18: Sentence Correction (SC2)
For SC butler Questions Click Here Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
(A) Monitoring heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
(B) Monitoring the exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.
(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising.
(E) Both athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
The best/excellent answers get kudos. There can be no best answer, or a few excellent answers! (A) Monitoring
heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
- Wrong: 1) Parallelism
2) Passive Voice(B) Monitoring the
exercise of heart patients, as well as athletes exercising, is now done by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
- Wrong: 1) Parallelism
2) Passive Voice(C) Small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines are now used to monitor the exercise of both heart patients and athletes.
- Correct(D) Broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines, small transmitters are now used to monitor
heart patients' exercise, as well as athletes exercising. - Wrong: 1) Parallelism (E) Both
athletes exercising and heart patients' exercise are now monitored by small transmitters broadcasting physiological measurements to nearby recording machines.
- Wrong: 1) Parallelism