Louis14
Hi guys,
I plan to pursue MSc in Finance from LSE or MFA from LBS. I'll surely apply to other schools to be on the safer side, but my foremost desire is to get into either of the two.
Profile:
1. Age 25
2. Nationality: Pakistani
3. UG: BBA (Hon's) Double Majors in Finance and Marketing from Lahore School of Economics (3rd best business school in Pakistan)
4. CGPA: 3.56
5. Internships: AIESEC; LABELS - an upscale fashion retail chain in Pakistan
6. GMAT to be taken: expected score 680-700
7. Languages: Fluent in English & Urdu
8. Extracurricular: Played under 19 cricket at regional level; won Special Mention at the most competitive Model United Nations conference in Pakistan; won another debating competition at my university.
Note: Pakistan doesn't offer many options to have exposure to international companies. The 'flamboyance' factor of working in top notch finance related MNCs or international companies is missing in my case, unlike in the cases of other applicant profiles that I have read. This has largely to do with my country's financial landscape than my competitive abilities. In addition, I couldn't gain valuable work experience since graduating in 2017 because I was pursuing competitive examinations to enter into the Civil Service of Pakistan. Unfortunately, I failed twice by a thin margin. Now I want to complete my education and build a career upon my passion to study and thrive in finance. After graduating, I want to work in an Investment Bank in a foreign country (preferably the UK or Singapore) before eventually starting my own business with either building a startup in the Fintech sector or a financial consultancy in my native country.
P.S. I have decided to write my personal statements with honesty and share the lessons that I have learnt through my staggering failures. I am not sure if the adcoms will appreciate honesty but my hardwork and struggle to pursue a dream is something I'm really proud of, even if I failed.
I would highly appreciate your honest review.
Hey
Louis14,
To start off with, I would like to assure you that you have a pretty fair profile,
Since you have prior knowledge about the degree you want to pursue and have a good GPA as well, you don’t have to worry about meeting the cut-offs for specific schools,
Now coming over to the extracurricular activities which you have talked about, you need to consider everything you have done starting from the impact you created at the MUN Conference, to the people you led during your regional cricket tournaments this needs to be showcased very strongly because you are competing with people who have international experience, who have engaged in several types of national competitions, etc.
The work experience might cause you some hindrance as you have not mentioned much about how long the duration of your internships were, I would advise you to showcase the learning aspect during your internships as the same will be very crucial since you will be competing with people who have experience of working in top MNC.
To improve your chances of selection at LSE and LBS, I would highly recommend working on the GMAT exam and aim for a 680+ score.
Taking everything into consideration apart from your target LSE and LBS schools here are some other top schools you can look at as well:
1)ESSEC
2)ESCP
3)Warwick
4)CASS
5)ESADE
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