In keeping with some of the themes in our
beginner’s guide to SC, this is yet another question that plays around with meaning. If you try to get too mechanical, this one will bite you in the butt.
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A. work shows the buildings
One of my best students just got punked by (A) a few days ago.
Superficially, the subject-verb agreement is great here: “work shows.” But it would be a mistake is to start looking for other issues. Trouble is, “work” isn’t the subject that performs the action “shows” in this sentence: the subject is actually “drawings.” So it should be “drawings… show…” (A) is out.
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B. work shows that the buildings were
(B) is easy to eliminate for the same reason as (A). If you saw this on an actual exam, you should cross it out and move on.
But there’s more going on here! If we think strictly and literally about the meaning of this sentence, it doesn’t quite work: “the drawings… show that the buildings were in the vast spaces of an imaginary Wild West.” Literally, it sounds like the drawings are somehow proving that those buildings were actually in the vast spaces of the Wild West, and that’s obviously ridiculous. Hold onto that thought – more of this sort of thing is coming in a moment.
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C. works show the buildings
This looks fine. Subject-verb is good, and we don’t have that goofy bit of “certainty” that appears in (B) (“shows that the buildings were in… the Wild West”). The meaning is OK in (C): the drawings show the buildings in an imaginary Wild West, but without suggesting that the buildings were
actually in the Wild West. Keep (C).
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D. works show the buildings as being
If you want to play the “being sounds funny!” card here, that’s OK, I guess. But the stronger reason to eliminate (D) comes down to meaning again: literally, (D) seems to imply that the drawings somehow show that the buildings were actually in the Wild West, and that’s ridiculous. And at the very least, there’s no reason for the extra words here. (D) is out.
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E. works show the buildings to have been
The exact same logic we used in (D) applies to (E), except that (E) uses the nicer-sounding “to have been” instead of “as being.” But it’s still wrong, even if it sounds nicer. (
And we don’t care about sound, anyway.) So (E) is out, and (C) is correct.