mikemcgarry
AR15J
Hi mikemcgarry,
Topic: Exceptions to the Modifier Touch Rule
https://magoosh.com/gmat/2013/modifiers ... orrection/I understood from the post--
if some modifier(modifying the same noun) is placed in between a noun and noun-modifier, that means it can not be placed any where else in the sentence.
However, consider the below sentence. As per the post, this is the correct sentence
Last week, the senator resigned who made the disparaging remark about older women.
The above sentence can be written
Last week, the senator who made the disparaging remark about older women resigned
Then why are we violating the touch rule in this case?
Dear
AR15J,
I'm happy to respond.
First of all, my friend, in order to alert me that you wanted to address me, it's not enough simply to type the text of my user name. You need to use the "mention this user" button, which will send me an email, alerting me to the fact that someone was asking for me.
My friend, with all due respect, I am going to say that you didn't read carefully enough. In that
blog article, in the section "
Exceptions to the Modifier Touch Rule," I first talked about what I called the BIG exception, vital noun modifier coming between a noun and other modifiers. Then I said, "
Other examples of exceptions to the Touch Rule involve a short set of words, such as an example phrase or a short intransitive verb phrase, that are correctly placed between a noun and its modifier." This has nothing at all to do with the first exception discussed, about multiple noun modifiers; this is a new and different exception to the Touch Rule, and the sentence you cite was an example of this later idea.
Does all this make sense?
Mike
Sorry
mikemcgarry, I did not know this before.
Thanks a lot for the detailed explanation. Your explanation always helps. Yes, I knew that there is a gap in my understanding, that's why I asked the question from you.
Correct me if I am wrong. If we insert any object (to which subject modifier can not refer) in between verb and subject modifier, in that case, this sentence would be wrong.
In the world cup, he did not play well who had been playing well in test matches.--incorrect
The judge was stuck in traffic who was in hurry to reach to the court. -- incorrectThanks RD for your comment.
Based on my understanding, the below sentence is wrong
Unlike most other elemental metals, gold has resistance to the corrosive action of air and water that[the resistance] enables it to maintain its characteristic luster unabated over time.
However, below sentences are correct and convey the same meaning. Please note that it's is just a novice's understanding. Correct me if you find it incorrect.
Unlike most other elemental metals, gold maintains its characteristic luster unabated over time, resisting to the corrosive action of air and water.
Unlike most other elemental metals, gold maintains its characteristic luster unabated over time in that it resists to the corrosive action of air and water.Let's wait for Mike's comment on our understanding.