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Hi mikemcgarry,

Topic: Exceptions to the Modifier Touch Rule

https://magoosh.com/gmat/2013/modifiers ... orrection/

I understood from the post--
if some modifier(modifying the same noun) is placed in between a noun and noun-modifier, that means it can not be placed any where else in the sentence.

However, consider the below sentence. As per the post, this is the correct sentence


Last week, the senator resigned who made the disparaging remark about older women.

The above sentence can be written

Last week, the senator who made the disparaging remark about older women resigned

Then why are we violating the touch rule in this case?
Dear AR15J,

I'm happy to respond. :-)

First of all, my friend, in order to alert me that you wanted to address me, it's not enough simply to type the text of my user name. You need to use the "mention this user" button, which will send me an email, alerting me to the fact that someone was asking for me.

My friend, with all due respect, I am going to say that you didn't read carefully enough. In that blog article, in the section "Exceptions to the Modifier Touch Rule," I first talked about what I called the BIG exception, vital noun modifier coming between a noun and other modifiers. Then I said, "Other examples of exceptions to the Touch Rule involve a short set of words, such as an example phrase or a short intransitive verb phrase, that are correctly placed between a noun and its modifier." This has nothing at all to do with the first exception discussed, about multiple noun modifiers; this is a new and different exception to the Touch Rule, and the sentence you cite was an example of this later idea.

Does all this make sense?
Mike :-)


Sorry mikemcgarry, I did not know this before.

Thanks a lot for the detailed explanation. Your explanation always helps. Yes, I knew that there is a gap in my understanding, that's why I asked the question from you.

Correct me if I am wrong. If we insert any object (to which subject modifier can not refer) in between verb and subject modifier, in that case, this sentence would be wrong.

In the world cup, he did not play well who had been playing well in test matches.--incorrect

The judge was stuck in traffic who was in hurry to reach to the court. -- incorrect




Thanks RD for your comment.

Based on my understanding, the below sentence is wrong

Unlike most other elemental metals, gold has resistance to the corrosive action of air and water that[the resistance] enables it to maintain its characteristic luster unabated over time.

However, below sentences are correct and convey the same meaning. Please note that it's is just a novice's understanding. Correct me if you find it incorrect.

Unlike most other elemental metals, gold maintains its characteristic luster unabated over time, resisting to the corrosive action of air and water.

Unlike most other elemental metals, gold maintains its characteristic luster unabated over time in that it resists to the corrosive action of air and water.


Let's wait for Mike's comment on our understanding.
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First of all, Thanks to mikemcgarry for such a wonderful blog post. The post is really helpful in listing all possible noun modifier errors that can be observed on GMAT.

Hi AR15J, Let me try to solve this confusion here.
The post initially says that noun modifiers should follow "Modifier touch rule". But, there are certain exceptions to it. The first statement you wrote is an example of such exception. In my view both the examples you wrote are correct.

I just have one question for mikemcgarry
As per the blog post, below sentence is wrong because "which" can not modify the clause.
Unlike most other elemental metals, gold resists the corrosive action of air and water, which enables it to maintain its characteristic luster unabated over time.

and this error is resolved by adding a term which modifies the collective idea presented by the earlier clause.(In this case I understand this is an ABSTRACT NOUN, please correct if my guess is wrong.)

- Unlike most other elemental metals, gold resists the corrosive action of air and water, a low reactivity that enables it to maintain its characteristic luster unabated over time.

Can we modify the sentence as below?

Unlike most other elemental metals, gold has resistance to the corrosive action of air and water that[the resistance] enables it to maintain its characteristic luster unabated over time.
Dear RMD007,

I'm happy to respond. :-)

This is the final sentence about which you were asking.
Unlike most other elemental metals, gold has resistance to the corrosive action of air and water that enables it to maintain its characteristic luster unabated over time.
There are a few different issues here.
1) On the basic modification issue, this sentence is grammatically correct.
2) This is a somewhat awkward sentence. The word "resistance" should have an indefinite article ("gold has a resistance...") Even then, it's not the most elegant way to convey the information.
3) Technically, "resistance" is an electrical property, so you are introducing possible scientific errors by using that word. This idea is very different from the chemical concept of "low reactivity."

You see, when you create sample sentence in an attempt to ask about isolated grammar points, the danger is that you introduce a host of other issues. Be extremely careful and thoughtful in the process of creating any of your own sentences as examples. It's always better to pull examples from published sources.

Does all this make sense?
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Dear RMD007,

I'm happy to respond. :-)

This is the final sentence about which you were asking.
Unlike most other elemental metals, gold has resistance to the corrosive action of air and water that enables it to maintain its characteristic luster unabated over time.
There are a few different issues here.
1) On the basic modification issue, this sentence is grammatically correct.
2) This is a somewhat awkward sentence. The word "resistance" should have an indefinite article ("gold has a resistance...") Even then, it's not the most elegant way to convey the information.
3) Technically, "resistance" is an electrical property, so you are introducing possible scientific errors by using that word. This idea is very different from the chemical concept of "low reactivity."

You see, when you create sample sentence in an attempt to ask about isolated grammar points, the danger is that you introduce a host of other issues. Be extremely careful and thoughtful in the process of creating any of your own sentences as examples. It's always better to pull examples from published sources.

Does all this make sense?
Mike :-)

Thank you so much for the explanation!
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Sorry mikemcgarry, I did not know this before.

Thanks a lot for the detailed explanation. Your explanation always helps. Yes, I knew that there is a gap in my understanding, that's why I asked the question from you.

Correct me if I am wrong. If we insert any object (to which subject modifier can not refer) in between verb and subject modifier, in that case, this sentence would be wrong.

In the world cup, he did not play well who had been playing well in test matches.--incorrect

The judge was stuck in traffic who was in hurry to reach to the court. -- incorrect
Dear AR15J,

I'm happy to respond. :-)

Yes, both of those sentence are train wrecks--not really grammatically wrong so much as far too awkward.

Ironically, there are exceptions in poetry:
They also serve who only stand and wait. -- John Milton (1608 - 1674)

In fact, that's precisely so awkward about the sentences, because it sounds as if you are trying to be excessively poetic about entirely mundane topics such as an injured soccer player or a judge stuck in traffic. It's as if someone tried to be poetic and failed miserably--that's what's so awkward about those sentences.

Needless to say, the language on the GMAT is about as far away from poetry as one can get, so we will not see these structures on the GMAT, probably no even in wrong answers!

Does all this make sense?
Mike :-)
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