Hi there!
I think you have a good shot at those schools & it's good that you're thinking about all of this early! In terms of some top line thoughts on how to improve your candidacy, if you can improve your GMAT score to the 720+ range that would be awesome. You can use the optional essay to explain the sleep issue that affected your GPA, but a higher GMAT score will also go a long way towards offsetting that & convincing them that you are up for the rigors of b-school.
From a work perspective, you want to get as many accomplishments under your belt as possible between now & when you apply & if you can get a promotion all the better. Look for opportunities to gain leadership experience both at work & in your extracurriculars. Keep up the good work with Big Brothers Big Sisters (they like to see consistency). Maybe there's opportunity to also serve in a leadership role there or in another organization?
I'd also work to refine your post-MBA goals. If you want to increase diversity that would mean being in an HR role rather than a strategy or partner role. Yes, you can work indirectly to increase diversity, but that would be a secondary thing -- the adcom will want to see what you plan to accomplish in your actual job & the specific business impact you plan to make. You'll also want to be ready to speak more specifically to why this is your passion. What are the expected trends in this space in the next 10-12 years, what will that translate to in terms of opportunities & problems for the companies in that space, and what's your vision for how you plan to help your consulting clients tackle those? Your post-MBA goals are critical since your argument for why you need the MBA rests on those.
Your demographics will definitely add to class mix & applying through the consortium is a good idea.
If you'd like some more specific support definitely reach out to us. We offer an Advanced Planning service for applicants like yourself who are thinking ahead & want to do everything they can to get into the best school possible! If you email Claudia at
claudia@admissionado.com she can share the details! You can also see some details about it on our site here:
https://admissionado.com/mba/mba-advanc ... g-program/