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Re: Reorganizing the corporate structure of Nitescheleds will be a cause [#permalink]
The answer is E


E) as suddenly hiring a large number of new workers will lead to a sense of instability and uncertainty among company employees,


In D, the word "which" is not suitable.
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Idiom is Just as X , so Y
In D, “which” is unnecessary.

So, E is correct

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Reorganizing the corporate structure of Nitescheleds will be a cause for concern for the employees; just like the company employees who will have a sense of instability and uncertainty following the sudden hiring of a large number of new workers, so restructuring the corporation will cause employees to feel anxious.

A) just like the company employees who will have a sense of instability and uncertainty following the sudden hiring of a large number of new workers,

B) like suddenly hiring a large number of new workers does lead to a sense of instability and uncertainty among company employees,

C) the company employees will have a sense of instability an uncertainty following the sudden hiring of a large number of new workers,

D) as suddenly hiring a large number of new workers which will lead to a sense of instability and uncertainty among company employees,

E) as suddenly hiring a large number of new workers will lead to a sense of instability and uncertainty among company employees,


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A - Constructing should be as X , so Y, this is not correct

B Same as A , incorrect construction

C - As is missing

D - which is not parallel with following clause

E - perfect in all aspects
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Reorganizing the corporate structure of Nitescheleds will be a cause for concern for the employees; just like the company employees who will have a sense of instability and uncertainty following the sudden hiring of a large number of new workers, so restructuring the corporation will cause employees to feel anxious.

A) just like the company employees who will have a sense of instability and uncertainty following the sudden hiring of a large number of new workers,
B) like suddenly hiring a large number of new workers does lead to a sense of instability and uncertainty among company employees,
C) the company employees will have a sense of instability an uncertainty following the sudden hiring of a large number of new workers,
D) as suddenly hiring a large number of new workers which will lead to a sense of instability and uncertainty among company employees,
E) as suddenly hiring a large number of new workers will lead to a sense of instability and uncertainty among company employees,

OFFICIAL EXPLANATION

• Punctuation: A colon (:), semicolon (;), and dash (—) replace connecting words.
They are usually used to draw our attention to the connection between the different parts of the sentence.

• Parallelism: Parallel verbs must have the same tense, but they can be a mix of
active/passive or positive/negative forms

• The structure just . . . so suggests that there needs to be parallelism between
the first section of the sentence and the second one.

• The first section begins with reorganizing the structure, therefore the second part
of the sentence should begin with suddenly hiring rather than company employees.
We need an ___ING word (a gerund) in order to maintain parallelism, not an ___ING word and a noun.

• In addition, because the second section begins with a verb (hiring) and not with a noun,
the correct idiomatic expression is just as, not just like.

Just as . . . so . . . will is a common idiomatic expression, which only D and E follow.

• In D, which is unnecessary and breaks the passive structure of the argument.

COMMENTS

gadde22 and Niraphan , welcome!

That OE is good, so I will not comment.

The best answer is that by adkikani . Kudos!

HAPPY NEW YEAR, everyone!
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