Alan Moore, in his graphic novel narratives, deliberately infusing

Because "Alan Moore" is the one doing the "deliberately infusing", these two phrases should be right next to each other. Here, they are separated by "in his graphic novel narratives," which makes it seem like the "graphic novel narratives" are the ones "deliberately infusing."
Choice (B) has the same problem, and it's even more confusing because we don't know until much later who "his" refers to.
Choice (C) combines all of the additional information into a single phrase between commas, which more clearly connects Moore to the actions "deliberately infusing" and "utilized." This is our best answer thus far. Choices (D) and (E) refer to an unidentified "his" and "them."
Choice (D) is choppy enough with two comma asides, but (E) is essentially unintelligible.


The correct answer is Choice (C).