Official Solution:The board follows policies that are unreasonably strict and so inflexible that they refuse to discuss permitting leaves of absences even when justifiable.A. they refuse to discuss permitting leaves of absences even when
B. it refuses to discuss permitting leaves of absences even when it is
C. it refuses to discuss permitting leaves of absences to be taken even when they are
D. permitting leaves of absences is not discussed even when
E. discussion of permitting leaves of absences is refused even when they will be
This sentence uses the plural pronoun
they to refer to the singular
board. It is illogical for
policies to
refuse to discuss, so
they cannot logically refer to
the policies. Another mistake is that there are omitted words creating ambiguity.
When justifiable is awkward and ambiguous. When is a subordinate conjunction and is supposed to introduce a 'subordinate clause', which has a subject and a verb. The correct answer will fix the pronoun number and clarify
what is justifiable.
Choice B corrects the pronoun error by using the singular
it to refer to
the board, but the second
it (after
when) is ambiguous and, in its singular form, cannot refer to
leaves of absences, the only antecedent that would logically be
justifiable.
Choice C corrects the pronoun error by using the singular
it to refer to
the board, and clarifies
what is justifiable;
when they are justifiable logically refers to
the leaves of absences. Adding the modifying infinitive phrase
to be taken further clarifies what role the
leaves of absences have in the sentence.
Choice D has an undesirable passive structure (
permitting...is not discussed) and fails to correct the awkward
when justifiable.
Choice E is passive and wordy (
discussion of permitting...is refused). It also contains a tense error (the future tense
will be should be the present tense
are).
Answer: C