scranjith
Bunuel
OFFICIAL EXPLANATION
Since dogs may be attracted to alcoholic beverages left out by the motel guests, it is strongly recommended to keep drinks and bottles out of their reach at all times.(D) it is highly recommended that drinks and bottles are kept out of dogs'
Incorrect.
This answer choice is grammatically incorrect. The singular pronoun its can only grammatically refer to motel, but this is not logical.
Since the phrase out of X's reach could only logically refer to dogs in the current context, the corrected sentence would require a plural pronoun.Please clarify on Choice D elimination. Is for pronoun error or subjunctive error?
Posted from my mobile device scranjith , option D is incorrect because it fails to use the command subjunctive verb
be.
"Recommended THAT" must be written in the command subjunctive form.
Your question tells me that you know the grammar recap that I am about to write.
I'm doing so for others who may not understand a cryptic reference to "subjunctive."
Option D, rewrite, correct: it is highly recommended that drinks and bottles be kept out of dogs'Command subjunctive: bossy adjective/verb + THAT + subject/noun + bare infinitive
Command subjunctive: recommend + THAT + drinks and bottles + BE
Verb:
areInfinitive:
to beBare infinitive (just remove the "to"):
beThe OE writer from Kaplan (whom
Bunuel is quoting) is mistaken.
The use of the pronoun "it" in option D is fine, and that pronoun is not supposed to refer to anything that precedes "it."
The "it" in option D refers to the entire that-clause that follows the word "it."
In my rewrite, the reference is 100% correct.
In my corrected sentence,
it refers to
that drinks and bottles be kept out of dogs' reach. Some people call this "it" a dummy or placeholder pronoun. Some people call the construction a "delayed antecedent" or a "cleft sentence" or "extraposition."
I don't care what anyone calls this construction as long as people understand how it works.
On the GMAT, in clauses that begin with IT IS, the word
it must refer to a that-clause, an infinitive clause, or a noun clause (a nominal or substantive clause).
→ That-clause: It is admirable that he stood up to the bully.
→ Infinitive clause: It is admirable to stand up to bullies.
→ Noun clause: It is admirable when people stand up to bullies.
See my post
here.
As is the case in official guides, the people who write the explanations and the people who write the questions are not the same and sometimes not of the same caliber.
I hope that answer helps.