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Tech industry employee benefits, as with other industries, were designed to increase the number of hours employees spend at work and to help attract top talent.[/quote]


A) as with
tech industry employee shouldn't be compared with other industries

B) as did those of
did is not parallel with were therefore out

C) as they have in
present tense and past tense should not be mixed with past tense

D) like in
We cannot determine who is referring the intended meaning is incomplete

E) like those of
This irons out all the flaws

Therefore IMO E
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Tech industry employee benefits, as with other industries, were designed to increase the number of hours employees spend at work and to help attract top talent.


A) as with Incorrect

as with uses wrong

B) as did those of Incorrect

Tech industry employee benefits is a noun, so as is not perfect

C) as they have in Incorrect

same as B

D) like in Incorrect

benefits plural, so those needed

E) like those of Correct
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(E) is the answer IMO

A)Tech industry employee benefits are compared with other industries- Eliminate

B) Did = were designed to increase the number of hours employees spend at work and to help attract top talent
Illogical meaning, also we can't compare noun with action

C) What is "they"? Tech industry employee benefits
Illogical comparison

D) Noun and prepositional phrase can't be compared

E) Correct comparison and meaning
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Ideal Split: We are looking to compare the benefits of the tech industry with those of other industries

A: Ambiguous comparison – There is no parallel prepositional phrase “with…” to steer in right direction

B: Possible replacement of DID is “Designed”, and it will render illogical meaning

C:
1) Incorrect comparison – Use of personal pronoun “THEY” is incorrect, it will refer to exact benefits (of tech industry)
2) Tense change is unnecessary

D:
1) Grammatically, LIKE is a preposition and should be followed by a noun
2) Even if we accept his structure, it will result in ambiguous comparison as there is no parallel prepositional phrase “in…” to steer in the right direction

E: Correct
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Tech industry employee benefits, as with other industries, were designed to increase the number of hours employees spend at work and to help attract top talent.


A) as with - Incorrect comparison , benefits with industries

B) as did those of - Did usage is incorrect here.

C) as they have in -they does not have any logical antecedant

D) like in - Incorrect comparison , benefits with industries

E) like those of - Correct
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Tech industry employee benefits, as with other industries, were designed to increase the number of hours employees spend at work and to help attract top talent.


A) as with

B) as did those of

C) as they have in

D) like in

E) like those of[/quote]

Classic comparison question. Employee benefits in tech industry are compared with the same benefits in other industries. Hence A, B and C are out (use of "as" is not correct). E is correct because of "those" (used in the place of "benefits").
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Project SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)


THE PROMPT
Quote:
Tech industry employee benefits, as with other industries, were designed to increase the number of hours employees spend at work and to help attract top talent.

• LIKE/AS
Like is a preposition, so we use it to compare nouns.
(Prepositions are followed by nouns.)

A verb must never be in a comparison phrase that uses like.
Stated differently, like is never followed immediately by a full clause that includes a verb.

(Remember: like is a preposition. Prepositions can be followed only by nouns, pronouns, or noun phrases.)

As is a conjunction used to compare clauses, verbs, or events.

The comma after benefits (no verb in sight!) tells us that we should use like, not as.
The sentence is comparing two nouns.

• What two things are under comparison?
(1) Employee benefits in the tech industry and
(2) Employee benefits ("those") in other industries

THE OPTIONS
Quote:
A) as with
• comparison error
→ Option A incorrectly compares tech industry employee benefits to other industries
Apples must be compared to apples.
An employee benefit is not similar to an industry.

• usage error: use like, not as, to compare nouns
→ See above. No verb? No comparison as.

• diction error: as with
as with is nonsensical.

That nonsensical phrase may be trying (and failing) to convey as is the case IN.
Important sidebar: That last phrase? Very useful.
You can use that last phrase to substitute for almost anything: as is the case (or as was the case).
I discuss another like/as construction and how to use as is the case in this post, here.

At any rate,
ELIMINATE A

Quote:
B) as did those of
• Wrong verb!
Did cannot stand in for were.

→ Although some form of to do (do, does, did) can substitute for almost any verb in English, there are two exceptions.

1. Do/Does/Did can never substitute for a to be verb (such as were in this option)
Wrong: I was quiet and she did, too.
Correct: I was quiet and she was, too.

2. Do/Does/Did can never substitute for have if have is an auxiliary (helping) verb.
(Those to do verbs can substitute if have is a standalone verb that means "to own, to possess, or to experience.")

Wrong: I had fallen asleep, and she did, too.
Correct: I had fallen asleep, and she had [fallen asleep], too.
Correct, different meaning of had: Alex had ten pennies and Indira did, too.
Did in the last case is okay because had = possessed ten pennies
ELIMINATE B

Quote:
C) as they have in
• verb agreement error
→ The present tense verb have does not agree with the past tense verb were.

• nonsensical meaning
. . . benefits, as they have in other industries, were
ELIMINATE C

Quote:
D) like in
• comparison error
benefits are incorrectly compared to other industries
ELIMINAT D

Quote:
E) like those of
• Bingo. Correct.
like compares two nouns and is not followed by a pesky verb in the phrase
those of keeps the comparison accurate.
Those of = employee benefits [in other industries]
KEEP

The answer is E.

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Mangs1297 and Konstantin1983 , welcome to SC Butler. :)

I am glad to see new members of the Butler Crew.
All aspirants have a standing invitation to post.
(The more you post, the more you understand. True story.)

These answers are quite good.
Keep up the hard work.

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