OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Tech industry employee benefits, as with other industries, were designed to increase the number of hours employees spend at work and to help attract top talent.
• LIKE/AS
→
Like is a
preposition, so we use it to compare
nouns.
(Prepositions are followed by nouns.)
A verb must never be in a comparison phrase that uses
like.Stated differently,
like is never followed immediately by a full clause that includes a verb.
(Remember:
like is a preposition. Prepositions can be followed only by nouns, pronouns, or noun phrases.)
As is a
conjunction used to compare clauses, verbs, or events.
The comma after
benefits (no verb in sight!) tells us that we should use
like, not as.
The sentence is comparing two nouns.
• What two things are under comparison?
(1) Employee benefits in the tech industry and
(2) Employee benefits ("those") in other industries
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) as with
• comparison error
→ Option A incorrectly compares tech industry employee
benefits to other
industriesApples must be compared to apples.
An employee benefit is not similar to an industry.
• usage error: use
like, not as, to compare nouns
→ See above. No verb? No comparison
as.
• diction error:
as with→
as with is nonsensical.
That nonsensical phrase may be trying (and failing) to convey
as is the case IN.
Important sidebar: That last phrase? Very useful.
You can use that last phrase to substitute for almost anything:
as is the case (or
as was the case).
I discuss another
like/as construction and how to use
as is the case in this post,
here.
At any rate,
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) as did those of
• Wrong verb!
Did cannot stand in for
were.
→ Although some form of to do (do, does, did) can substitute for almost any verb in English, there are two exceptions.
1. Do/Does/Did can never substitute for a
to be verb (such as
were in this option)
Wrong: I was quiet and she did, too.
Correct: I was quiet and she was, too.
2. Do/Does/Did can never substitute for
have if
have is an auxiliary (helping) verb.
(Those to do verbs
can substitute if
have is a standalone verb that means "to own, to possess, or to experience.")
Wrong: I had fallen asleep, and she did, too.
Correct: I had fallen asleep, and she had [fallen asleep], too.
Correct, different meaning of
had: Alex had ten pennies and Indira did, too.
Did in the last case is okay because
had = possessed ten pennies
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) as they have in
• verb agreement error
→ The present tense verb
have does not agree with the past tense verb
were.
• nonsensical meaning
. . . benefits, as they
have in other industries,
wereELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) like in
• comparison error
→
benefits are incorrectly compared to other
industriesELIMINAT D
Quote:
E) like those of
• Bingo. Correct.
→
like compares two nouns and is not followed by a pesky verb in the phrase
→
those of keeps the comparison accurate.
Those of = employee benefits [in other industries]
KEEP
The answer is E.COMMENTSMangs1297 and
Konstantin1983 , welcome to SC Butler.
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